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  • MarioNintendo
    Expect delays.
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Mar 2008
    • 4177

    #1

    MarioNintendo - Test my WIP!

    Not whip, WIP. Work In Progress. You're a dummy if you actually thought

    Anyway, that's right! I stepped a song tonight (Unshakeable by Celldweller), something I haven't done in a long time, and it's a genre of song I had never stepped before. I think it's fun, but I'm at the same time unsure of the patterns choice/song length/diversity/fun factor, so I'm asking you guys to tell me what you think!

    Praise/blame anything you could find, this would be very appreciated! I plan on sending this to the next batch, so hit me with any help you could provide.

  • blindreper1179
    Vice President Of TGB
    • Jun 2006
    • 5900

    #2
    Re: MarioNintendo - Test my WIP!

    Uh, if you could upload on mediafire, that would be awesome. I can't dl from the link you provide.
    Originally posted by thesunfan
    absolutely I want to vomit on your face irl
    Originally posted by choof
    It was like trying to throw logic at a fuckin brick wall lmao
    Originally posted by choof
    whats more dense, a black hole or an icyworld file
    Originally posted by Celirra
    I've never been so disappointed by a man from Alabama than I am right now

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    • FissionMailed1
      FFR Player
      • Feb 2012
      • 1267

      #3
      Re: MarioNintendo - Test my WIP!

      Mediafire mirror: http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?lpn264jk674b7qz


      YOUR THROBBING MULTIFARIOUS LUSTFUL DESIRES ARE COMPLETED N YOUR HYPER-ORANGE SELF, YOU MAKE ME LOVE AGAIN, YOU'VE CHANGED MY HEART, MY MELANCHOLIA DISAPPEARS WHEN YOU ARE INSIDE OF ME, MY HUMAN RAGE IS TEMPERED WHEN I AM INSIDE YOU, THE SECRET IS COMMUNICATION, LONGEVITY, STAMINA, REPETITION, FURY, SOULFUL KISSING, EARPLUGS. YOU FUCKING CORPORATE COCKS AND CUNTS.

      MY ANXIETY COMPLETE, MY DESIRE REPLETE, THE TASTE OF ORANGE BLOOD AND CUM AND GREENBACKS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. THE STREETS WILL RUN ORANGE WITH YOUR MIXTURE OF CHEETOS AND HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS REGURGITATED AND EATEN AND SHIT OUT AGAIN AND EATEN AGAIN.

      YOU ARE MY SCULPTURE, MY SCULPTRA, MY SELF-DEFINITION. MY DEFINITION OF HUMANITY, MY HARMONY. MY HEART AND MY MIND.

      YOU ARE SO ORANGE. SO CRUNCHY. SO CONSUMABLE.

      THE NEW ORANGE UNDERGROUND IS THE ORANGE UP MY ASS. AND YOUR ASS.

      I LOVE YOU CHEETOS.

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      • MarioNintendo
        Expect delays.
        FFR Simfile Author
        FFR Music Producer
        • Mar 2008
        • 4177

        #4
        Re: MarioNintendo - Test my WIP!

        Wow that was quick thanks FM!

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        • FissionMailed1
          FFR Player
          • Feb 2012
          • 1267

          #5
          Re: MarioNintendo - Test my WIP!

          Hehe, no problem :P


          YOUR THROBBING MULTIFARIOUS LUSTFUL DESIRES ARE COMPLETED N YOUR HYPER-ORANGE SELF, YOU MAKE ME LOVE AGAIN, YOU'VE CHANGED MY HEART, MY MELANCHOLIA DISAPPEARS WHEN YOU ARE INSIDE OF ME, MY HUMAN RAGE IS TEMPERED WHEN I AM INSIDE YOU, THE SECRET IS COMMUNICATION, LONGEVITY, STAMINA, REPETITION, FURY, SOULFUL KISSING, EARPLUGS. YOU FUCKING CORPORATE COCKS AND CUNTS.

          MY ANXIETY COMPLETE, MY DESIRE REPLETE, THE TASTE OF ORANGE BLOOD AND CUM AND GREENBACKS RUNNING DOWN MY FACE. THE STREETS WILL RUN ORANGE WITH YOUR MIXTURE OF CHEETOS AND HUNDRED DOLLAR BILLS REGURGITATED AND EATEN AND SHIT OUT AGAIN AND EATEN AGAIN.

          YOU ARE MY SCULPTURE, MY SCULPTRA, MY SELF-DEFINITION. MY DEFINITION OF HUMANITY, MY HARMONY. MY HEART AND MY MIND.

          YOU ARE SO ORANGE. SO CRUNCHY. SO CONSUMABLE.

          THE NEW ORANGE UNDERGROUND IS THE ORANGE UP MY ASS. AND YOUR ASS.

          I LOVE YOU CHEETOS.

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          • RadiantVibe
            PUNKTURE DERBY
            • Dec 2011
            • 723

            #6
            Re: MarioNintendo - Test my WIP!

            Doesn't seem very on beat during the second half of the song. Other than that it was fun!

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            • MarioNintendo
              Expect delays.
              FFR Simfile Author
              FFR Music Producer
              • Mar 2008
              • 4177

              #7
              Re: MarioNintendo - Test my WIP!

              Originally posted by RadiantVibe
              Doesn't seem very on beat during the second half of the song. Other than that it was fun!
              I changed the offset, seems fine now. Thanks for the heads up!

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              • blindreper1179
                Vice President Of TGB
                • Jun 2006
                • 5900

                #8
                Re: MarioNintendo - Test my WIP!

                the jumps you make for measures 32-38. The sound you're following, you don't repeat it for measures 40-56. It throws me off when the jumps aren't going to the same sound. You can't really tell you're stepping the vocals until around measure 48.

                Also, the three 16ths you put in measure 43, you can barely make out what you are going to.

                Besides that, solid file.
                Originally posted by thesunfan
                absolutely I want to vomit on your face irl
                Originally posted by choof
                It was like trying to throw logic at a fuckin brick wall lmao
                Originally posted by choof
                whats more dense, a black hole or an icyworld file
                Originally posted by Celirra
                I've never been so disappointed by a man from Alabama than I am right now

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                • MarioNintendo
                  Expect delays.
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  FFR Music Producer
                  • Mar 2008
                  • 4177

                  #9
                  Re: MarioNintendo - Test my WIP!

                  Originally posted by blindreper1179
                  the jumps you make for measures 32-38. The sound you're following, you don't repeat it for measures 40-56. It throws me off when the jumps aren't going to the same sound. You can't really tell you're stepping the vocals until around measure 48. Indeed, that could become a problem. I did it this way, thought, because it is what granted me the most linear difficulty curve. I tried keeping the jumps constant and I couldn't find a way to do it without either being too easy or filled with jumps to incorporate the vocals as well

                  Also, the three 16ths you put in measure 43, you can barely make out what you are going to. True, but, once you heard them, they're pretty clear, are they not? xP I put them because I'm 100% sure the judges in the queue will think they're missing notes if I omit them.

                  Besides that, solid file.
                  Thanks a lot, though, made me rethink those parts, really appreciated!

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                  • blindreper1179
                    Vice President Of TGB
                    • Jun 2006
                    • 5900

                    #10
                    Re: MarioNintendo - Test my WIP!

                    The second part is definitely true. I see your point there. XD lol
                    Originally posted by thesunfan
                    absolutely I want to vomit on your face irl
                    Originally posted by choof
                    It was like trying to throw logic at a fuckin brick wall lmao
                    Originally posted by choof
                    whats more dense, a black hole or an icyworld file
                    Originally posted by Celirra
                    I've never been so disappointed by a man from Alabama than I am right now

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