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  • Coolboyrulez0
    VICES
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Aug 2006
    • 10042
    #1

    Closure

    "Not quite sure what state of mind I was in when I wrote this... but I finished it earlier today... pretty interesting piece to say to the least.
    The melodies + atmosphere I produced make me feel melancholic, which is my favorite state induced by music, personally."

    http://soundcloud.com/cbr/closure

    Ending is perhaps a bit abrupt but hey... that's how I roll.

    PS: Hope you like the sound design and mixing, I THINK I have perfected it for having colored headphones and a built-in soundcard,
    although I do hear a bit of static in the melody later on, but I have no idea what is causing this. (assuming it's the VST itself)
    Last edited by Coolboyrulez0; 08-19-2012, 08:09 AM.
    https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
    https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/
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    • Coolboyrulez0
      VICES
      FFR Simfile Author
      FFR Music Producer
      • Aug 2006
      • 10042
      #2
      Re: Closure

      Didn't enjoy it, guys? Not used to not getting commented upon. (even if it may be "negative")

      If you guys didn't like it, I'd enjoy some criticism on what you didn't like

      Comments do help me to see what I am doing right or not in the eyes of others at least. (oddly enough, I REALLY like the way this one sounds xD)
      https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
      https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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        • Patashu
          FFR Simfile Author
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Apr 2006
          • 8609
          #3
          Re: Closure

          I think some of the instrument choice is bad but the song is good ignoring that
          Patashu makes Chiptunes in Famitracker:
          http://soundcloud.com/patashu/8bit-progressive-metal-fading-world
          http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/smallpackbanner.png
          Best non-AAAs: ERx8 v2 (14-1-0-4), Hajnal (3-0-0-0), RunnyMorning (8-0-0-4), Xeno-Flow (1-0-0-3), Blue Rose (35-2-0-20), Ketsarku (14-0-0-0), Silence (1-0-0-0), Lolo (14-1-0-1)
          http://i231.photobucket.com/albums/ee301/xiaoven/solorulzsig.png

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            • kommisar
              Dark Chancellor
              FFR Simfile Author
              FFR Music Producer
              • Jun 2005
              • 7328
              #4
              Re: Closure

              I found the drum loop a little irritating haha. The background synth at the start is the exact chord progression of the bowser stages in mario 64 haha (unless that was intentional oups). The instrumentation is the issue here I guess. I think this would be great with other sounds.

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                • Coolboyrulez0
                  VICES
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  FFR Music Producer
                  • Aug 2006
                  • 10042
                  #5
                  Re: Closure

                  yup kommi that was homage to bowser stage after listening to sig stream for quite a bit... thought it fit rather well :P
                  https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
                  https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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                    • StoneMcKnuckle
                      FFR Player
                      • May 2011
                      • 790
                      #6
                      Re: Closure

                      Originally posted by kommisar
                      The instrumentation is the issue here I guess. I think this would be great with other sounds.
                      definitely agree. considering the track is really chill, that really sharp saw pad or whatever it is stands out and breaks everything imho

                      nothing really wrong with the composition or mixing from what I can tell, but it's absolutely not my cup of tea. but if this is exactly what you were going for, this isn't really valid criticism imo. oh well

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