A BUNCH of unfinished songs. Help me out?

Re: A BUNCH of unfinished songs. Help me out?

Intro to one sounded cool, the synth thingy was kinda lame
Second one was alright imo sounded like my car
Third one ...wut. Somewhat reminds me of Sexy Party by JRabbit and Tremourz
Fourth one felt a little abrasive because it didn't flow on beat to me, not sure why.
Fifth, better than original +1, finish this please so I can DJ it in turntable or something
Sixth was chill, not really something I'm used to you making.
Seventh, ouch lmao
Eight would have a pcool 64th trill
Ninth had a really cool sound haha, not sure why I liked this so much. I think I'm going to show this to a friend that would like it.
Ten was kinda generic imo, didn't really stand out to me (actually had to listen to it twice because I read something on fb and replied, and realized I tuned it out >.< )
Eleven has a kinda creepy feel to it in the beginning, add some low bass chords at some point and give it a deep atmosphere and it would be tight as fuc imo.

Re: A BUNCH of unfinished songs. Help me out?

Yeah, ten was actually a collab with a friend of mine that is just starting out making music. I let him do most of it but I touched up stuff to sound better. I'm really surprised you liked the fifth one so much actually, I'll definitely work on that more. I agree that 11 is pretty decent, I'm just trying to figure out a decent breakdown for it.
The first, second, and sixth are all basically done, just need to touch up stuff. Third one is supposed to be a remix of Sleng Teng Dub. Fourth is somewhat experimental. The main bassline is literally made from a jamaicain and a bitcrusher. Seventh is really rough, but it is supposed to be pretty crazy. The bass is super deep, so I'm not sure if you're getting distortion because of that. Eight is also experimental. Simple but catchy. Nine is my attempt at making something really happy sounding I guess. I guess ten does sound generic to people that listen to that sort of music, I just don't that often but wanted to try it (Mostly my friend's though).

Thanks for listening and giving your input and everything! It's actually really really helpful. I suppose I'll focus on 5 and 11 mostly, plus the couple I'm almost done just because they're basically done, haha.