First Song! Convergence - Hyper Two

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  • Freak83
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Feb 2003
    • 3281
    #1

    First Song! Convergence - Hyper Two

    My friend and I just released our first song for our band - Hyper Two. The song is called Convergence and it's along the lines of instrumental rock.

    YouTube and SoundCloud links provided for whatever you prefer. Would love to hear your thoughts and feedback on it!



    Hyper Two - Convergence
    http://www.soundcloud.com/hypertwo/convergence
    Hyper Two is the collaborative effort of Jonathan Holowka and Sai Chaitanya. Two Torontonians with a knack for music, marketing, squash, engineering and gaming. Convergence is the first of many son
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    • TheSaxRunner05
      The Doctor
      • Apr 2006
      • 6144
      #2
      Re: First Song! Convergence - Hyper Two

      It's a good start, but the arpeggiating simple chord structure gets a bit too pedantic for me after awhile. The song title made me thing of different ideas coming together, when the song just chilled on a single idea, never really building to anything. Not that music has to build to something, but it dragged a bit too much for me (1,3,5,3,1, repeat).

      The part 1:23 - 1:40 had the beginnings of a good melody, and I wish it was developed more. Don't be afraid to do more with it. I like the mood of the piece, just be afraid to shift some stuff around a little more as your group develops. It's a good start.

      I hope this was helpful!


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        • Freak83
          FFR Simfile Author
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Feb 2003
          • 3281
          #3
          Re: First Song! Convergence - Hyper Two

          It does help! Thanks very much. I posted this on another forum as well and the common theme among responses seems to be that it "needs a little bit more". Perhaps it's because there was no instruments. Gonna try to make this happen in our next song!

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