My first real song?

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  • Xiz
    TWG Chaos
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Feb 2012
    • 3399
    #1

    My first real song?

    So I mean... I made this two months ago but I need some critique on it for when I make my next song. This is really my second attempt at making music. So yeah, one question:

    If you could change / improve / takeaway one thing - what would it be. Thanks <3



    http://soundcloud.com/vincent-de-la-torre/outofcereal

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    • Mau5
      FFR Player
      • Nov 2011
      • 790
      #2
      Re: My first real song?

      1:37 FOK YA

      Extremely nice job for your first song! You've got potential haha

      The only thing i'm not a huge fan of is that WUBWUB scratches of a sorts at like 2:15 and 2:17, but you did pretty well with balance throughout the whole song haha. You're a natural!
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        • Xiz
          TWG Chaos
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Feb 2012
          • 3399
          #3
          Re: My first real song?

          Originally posted by Mau5
          1:37 FOK YA

          Extremely nice job for your first song! You've got potential haha

          The only thing i'm not a huge fan of is that WUBWUB scratches of a sorts at like 2:15 and 2:17, but you did pretty well with balance throughout the whole song haha. You're a natural!

          Thanks

          And yeah, I struggle with matching dubstep related material into what im doing. Thanks for your feedback!

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            • DjMeas
              FFR Player
              • Sep 2011
              • 164
              #4
              Re: My first real song?

              Posted my thoughts on your SC Waveform Great to hear new musicians, keep it up!
              http://soundcloud.com/undercoverapplemusic/leaflette-across-the-ocean-ep
              [ Across the Ocean EP now availabe on iTunes/Amazon/Bandcamp! ]

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                • Xiz
                  TWG Chaos
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Feb 2012
                  • 3399
                  #5
                  Re: My first real song?

                  Originally posted by DjMeas
                  Posted my thoughts on your SC Waveform Great to hear new musicians, keep it up!
                  I love your input!! Thanks man that really helps

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