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  • blindreper1179
    Vice President Of TGB
    • Jun 2006
    • 5900

    #1

    I'm new to making music!

    I'm new (obviously) and was wondering how this sounds so far. Any tips and critiques are appreciated, and welcomed. I'm not sure what I'm going for overall, but gotta experiment, and this is where I'm starting.

    http://soundcloud.com/blind-eyez/no-title-yet-wip
    Last edited by blindreper1179; 03-12-2012, 10:12 PM.
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  • midnghtraver
    Icarus Moth
    FFR Music Producer
    • Jan 2006
    • 2064

    #2
    Re: I'm new to making music!

    Your bassline is really muddy. Maybe throw it up an entire octave? Your synths are pretty alright for being new to sound design. Your song structure is a little odd, there's really only 1 progression, and the drums are a little boring.

    Make a more complex drum pattern!

    Your melodies are pretty cool though, I like the synth that comes in later.

    Honestly (surprisingly), not a great need for compression, so good job on that!

    EDIT: Sample choice is good too.

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    • blindreper1179
      Vice President Of TGB
      • Jun 2006
      • 5900

      #3
      Re: I'm new to making music!

      Thanks man, I was hoping you'd come into here. I'll work on those then.
      Originally posted by thesunfan
      absolutely I want to vomit on your face irl
      Originally posted by choof
      It was like trying to throw logic at a fuckin brick wall lmao
      Originally posted by choof
      whats more dense, a black hole or an icyworld file
      Originally posted by Celirra
      I've never been so disappointed by a man from Alabama than I am right now

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      • zajac
        aka uAnimals
        FFR Music Producer
        • Aug 2003
        • 4050

        #4
        Re: I'm new to making music!

        Isn't Milla so nice
        Originally posted by Spec & Aperson
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        • Gravity Kitten
          FFR Player
          • Jul 2008
          • 644

          #5
          Re: I'm new to making music!

          needs more wub!!!!!!!

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          • Mau5
            FFR Player
            • Nov 2011
            • 790

            #6
            Re: I'm new to making music!

            Sounds awesome,
            though..
            More chords
            More drums :P
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            • midnghtraver
              Icarus Moth
              FFR Music Producer
              • Jan 2006
              • 2064

              #7
              Re: I'm new to making music!

              Originally posted by zajac
              Isn't Milla so nice
              And what is that supposed to mean?

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              • DjMeas
                FFR Player
                • Sep 2011
                • 164

                #8
                Re: I'm new to making music!

                Milla is pretty dead on

                Keep it up though, you have something going there and it just needs more attention!
                http://soundcloud.com/undercoverapplemusic/leaflette-across-the-ocean-ep
                [ Across the Ocean EP now availabe on iTunes/Amazon/Bandcamp! ]

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