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  • blindreper1179
    Vice President Of TGB
    • Jun 2006
    • 5900
    #1

    I'm new to making music!

    I'm new (obviously) and was wondering how this sounds so far. Any tips and critiques are appreciated, and welcomed. I'm not sure what I'm going for overall, but gotta experiment, and this is where I'm starting.

    http://soundcloud.com/blind-eyez/no-title-yet-wip
    Last edited by blindreper1179; 03-12-2012, 10:12 PM.
    Originally posted by thesunfan
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    • midnghtraver
      Icarus Moth
      FFR Music Producer
      • Jan 2006
      • 2064
      #2
      Re: I'm new to making music!

      Your bassline is really muddy. Maybe throw it up an entire octave? Your synths are pretty alright for being new to sound design. Your song structure is a little odd, there's really only 1 progression, and the drums are a little boring.

      Make a more complex drum pattern!

      Your melodies are pretty cool though, I like the synth that comes in later.

      Honestly (surprisingly), not a great need for compression, so good job on that!

      EDIT: Sample choice is good too.

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        • blindreper1179
          Vice President Of TGB
          • Jun 2006
          • 5900
          #3
          Re: I'm new to making music!

          Thanks man, I was hoping you'd come into here. I'll work on those then.
          Originally posted by thesunfan
          absolutely I want to vomit on your face irl
          Originally posted by choof
          It was like trying to throw logic at a fuckin brick wall lmao
          Originally posted by choof
          whats more dense, a black hole or an icyworld file
          Originally posted by Celirra
          I've never been so disappointed by a man from Alabama than I am right now

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            • zajac
              aka uAnimals
              FFR Music Producer
              • Aug 2003
              • 4050
              #4
              Re: I'm new to making music!

              Isn't Milla so nice
              Originally posted by Spec & Aperson
              We Rate You: Cool Motherfucer. 9/10

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                • Gravity Kitten
                  FFR Player
                  • Jul 2008
                  • 644
                  #5
                  Re: I'm new to making music!

                  needs more wub!!!!!!!

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                    • Mau5
                      FFR Player
                      • Nov 2011
                      • 790
                      #6
                      Re: I'm new to making music!

                      Sounds awesome,
                      though..
                      More chords
                      More drums :P
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                        • midnghtraver
                          Icarus Moth
                          FFR Music Producer
                          • Jan 2006
                          • 2064
                          #7
                          Re: I'm new to making music!

                          Originally posted by zajac
                          Isn't Milla so nice
                          And what is that supposed to mean?

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                            • DjMeas
                              FFR Player
                              • Sep 2011
                              • 164
                              #8
                              Re: I'm new to making music!

                              Milla is pretty dead on

                              Keep it up though, you have something going there and it just needs more attention!
                              http://soundcloud.com/undercoverapplemusic/leaflette-across-the-ocean-ep
                              [ Across the Ocean EP now availabe on iTunes/Amazon/Bandcamp! ]

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