Re: Xoon Legacy Pack (Submissions Close on Feb. 1st)
bgs i'm not super worried about, banners I wanted conformity at 512x168
Jashin no konrei
-You have a good understanding of making files, and I can definitely see this making it in eventually. Here's what I'd like you to work on for this file.
1. The file is far too difficult during the jumpstream sections. The rest of the file is particularly tame and easy compared to these sections. Just 16th streams with -some- jumps accentuating particular hits would suffice.
2. You're faithfully following the snare drum 8th jumps, but this becomes incredibly stale and boring while there's all kinds of cool guitar stuff going on in the back. I'd encourage you to re-write these sections following the guitar and its accentuations.
bgs i'm not super worried about, banners I wanted conformity at 512x168
Jashin no konrei
-You have a good understanding of making files, and I can definitely see this making it in eventually. Here's what I'd like you to work on for this file.
1. The file is far too difficult during the jumpstream sections. The rest of the file is particularly tame and easy compared to these sections. Just 16th streams with -some- jumps accentuating particular hits would suffice.
2. You're faithfully following the snare drum 8th jumps, but this becomes incredibly stale and boring while there's all kinds of cool guitar stuff going on in the back. I'd encourage you to re-write these sections following the guitar and its accentuations.
held onto that for a while waiting for a pack of some kind to send it to lol
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