Re: Untitled StepMania Pack v2 (Graphics Needed)
Insane Techniques (AlexDest) - Accepted
there are still a few spots that can be accented better (in my opinion), but it's accepted as is
Atropos (rCaliberGX) - Rejected
8.136s - not sure if accidental but no need to just put 1 roll here and then nowhere else for the whole file
29.656s - listen closely, the 24ths are constant
32.532s - in these sections all the mini jacks dont make sense, the pitch is constantly ascending. it's an interesting touch to accentuate the highest part of the melody, but coupled with the fact that so many jacks and minijacks are being used everywhere else in the file it's over the top
44.235s - bad pr for the bass piano note
74.730s - mixing the layering with the almost inaudible percussion in the background with the foreground piano makes this part quite amibguous and confusing to play, whereas it'd be better to stick to the audible snare, for example the trill at 78s and the jump layered into it
89.977s - long jumptrill for a fairly soft sound that is changing is pretty uncreative
while there were a lot of good aspects in this chart and good mine/hold usage for the staccato/legato piano, jack usage seemed over the top and forced where trills or just regular 16ths patterns would suffice, reserving the jacks for certain elements. the layering is quite heavy in some of the quieter parts too, and in some cases it's amibguous what is being followed such as the case in 74.7s
squall [revision] (rCaliberGX) - Conditional
73.549s - two missing 24ths
74.180s - ditto
85.416s - missing 16th. there is actually a pattern of a 16th triplet after the hand on the 4th, then a 24th triplet every 8 beats, hence the missing notes i'm pointing out
86.442s - drums here are just 16ths, not sure about 24ths. also there are missing 16ths before the 24ths
87.916s - two missing 24ths
90.468s - missing 16th
much better now, and accepted after fixed
Karera Futari Wa Ai To Kanki No Gokusai Sekai No Naka O Aruite Iru [revision] (rCaliberGX) is pending fission's review
Insane Techniques (AlexDest) - Accepted
there are still a few spots that can be accented better (in my opinion), but it's accepted as is
Atropos (rCaliberGX) - Rejected
8.136s - not sure if accidental but no need to just put 1 roll here and then nowhere else for the whole file
29.656s - listen closely, the 24ths are constant
32.532s - in these sections all the mini jacks dont make sense, the pitch is constantly ascending. it's an interesting touch to accentuate the highest part of the melody, but coupled with the fact that so many jacks and minijacks are being used everywhere else in the file it's over the top
44.235s - bad pr for the bass piano note
74.730s - mixing the layering with the almost inaudible percussion in the background with the foreground piano makes this part quite amibguous and confusing to play, whereas it'd be better to stick to the audible snare, for example the trill at 78s and the jump layered into it
89.977s - long jumptrill for a fairly soft sound that is changing is pretty uncreative
while there were a lot of good aspects in this chart and good mine/hold usage for the staccato/legato piano, jack usage seemed over the top and forced where trills or just regular 16ths patterns would suffice, reserving the jacks for certain elements. the layering is quite heavy in some of the quieter parts too, and in some cases it's amibguous what is being followed such as the case in 74.7s
squall [revision] (rCaliberGX) - Conditional
73.549s - two missing 24ths
74.180s - ditto
85.416s - missing 16th. there is actually a pattern of a 16th triplet after the hand on the 4th, then a 24th triplet every 8 beats, hence the missing notes i'm pointing out
86.442s - drums here are just 16ths, not sure about 24ths. also there are missing 16ths before the 24ths
87.916s - two missing 24ths
90.468s - missing 16th
much better now, and accepted after fixed
Karera Futari Wa Ai To Kanki No Gokusai Sekai No Naka O Aruite Iru [revision] (rCaliberGX) is pending fission's review
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