ODIPack3 submissions (Release when graphics are done)

measure 8-9 i don't think you should switch between the sounds like this, i think it can be made really cool if just layered properly
measure 11&15&66&70 it's a 16th minijack on the first 4th? you don't have to have it as a jack if you don't want to though
measure 11&66 the last 16th isn't there
measure 17 you could have a freeze in the middle of the mines or even have some kind of trill to that scream instead of the mines but it's cool the way it is
measure 26&28&30 one 8th too much in the middle
measure 26-30 i would do this entire section differently with the 4ths only being jumps if both the melody and bassdrum hits and not just the bassdrum, when it's just singles to the bassdrum i would try to make this obvious with patterns instead, i doing it that way makes following the melody when playing it easier since now all 4ths look the same regardless of if the melody hits on it or not. but this is a stepping style thing and you can do as you like
measure 31 i think this would also be cooler if you kept the melody and just added singles to the percussion, it'll still become climactic and most of the percussion will become jumps
measure 33 i would remove the mines and add that cool sound
measure 40 the first 16th isnt there
measure 41 you could add 2-3 freezes to the end of this sound
measure 41 you could have a trill to the same scream again if you want to
measure 43 1 more vocal note between the 48th and the jump
measure 42-53 the vocals could perhaps be a bit more on-beat here and there in some parts here but overall it's fine
measure 55 1 missing 16th right after the first 4th
measure 55 why are there 3 jumps it's nothing else there
measure 56-61 if the jumps are to the very subtle snare drum then there are some missing ones. i would just layer the vocals here instead since you'll get a similar looking result and they're obviously much much more prominent. the strings can still give you some 16ths.