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  • Flyleef
    FFR Player
    • May 2007
    • 401

    #16
    Re: Check out my rap song! It's streaming

    Originally posted by Synthlight
    I may be wrong but I think the beat needs some refining (for the first song you linked). Did you also do "Gimme Head". For your age you have some serious skills man. Keep at it. Really.

    Cheers,

    Synthlight
    No, he did. I just started making music on this on program a couple months ago, so yeah, it probably does need some refining. I play piano so I know how to make music and stuff, I just need to get used to the program I'm using. (Fruity Loops)

    The music production quality is holding you back
    Wait, what do you mean? lol
    Last edited by Flyleef; 08-8-2007, 01:04 PM. Reason: program
    No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
    these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
    If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
    My heart, filled with loving radiance
    Is forever thinking of you.

    These words that we play are a pleasant melody
    All I want is to have you by my side,
    so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
    even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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    • Nyokou
      ( ̄ー ̄)
      • Apr 2005
      • 4246

      #17
      Re: Check out our rap song! It's streaming

      o__O Wow, that's really good. I'm jealous.

      I wanted to do this kinda stuff for my friends when I was younger, cause they were like rhythmically challenged on computer music programs when it came to making beats, but they were amazing emcees.

      Good job. xD
      Twitter | Instagram | Snapchat: Nyokou

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      • Flyleef
        FFR Player
        • May 2007
        • 401

        #18
        Re: Check out our rap song! It's streaming

        Originally posted by Nyokou
        o__O Wow, that's really good. I'm jealous.

        I wanted to do this kinda stuff for my friends when I was younger, cause they were like rhythmically challenged on computer music programs when it came to making beats, but they were amazing emcees.

        Good job. xD
        Thanks! Try doing it now then!
        No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
        these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
        If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
        My heart, filled with loving radiance
        Is forever thinking of you.

        These words that we play are a pleasant melody
        All I want is to have you by my side,
        so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
        even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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        • RB_Dreamscanner
          ☭Retired Top One Hander☭
          • Nov 2006
          • 1789

          #19
          Re: Check out our rap song! It's streaming



          ew...

          anyway you got amazing talent man
          "The Communist vision is the vision of man without God"



          Retired, Finished at rank 295, Top one hander on FFR

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          • ~HentaiXXX~
            Banned
            • Apr 2007
            • 2955

            #20
            Re: Check out our rap song! It's streaming

            You do have good talent, I just don't like rap/hip hop too much.

            PS: Re-listened, the lyrics made me laugh a little bit.

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            • Flyleef
              FFR Player
              • May 2007
              • 401

              #21
              Re: Check out our rap song! It's streaming

              Originally posted by ~HentaiXXX~
              You do have good talent, I just don't like rap/hip hop too much.

              PS: Re-listened, the lyrics made me laugh a little bit.
              I will make a song for FFR, so look at for that alright!? Be sure to FC it!
              No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
              these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
              If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
              My heart, filled with loving radiance
              Is forever thinking of you.

              These words that we play are a pleasant melody
              All I want is to have you by my side,
              so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
              even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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              • OnixRose
                FFR Player
                • Aug 2006
                • 1023

                #22
                Re: Check out our rap song! It's streaming

                Originally posted by Flyleef
                Check out our rap song!
                no.

                1000% supporter of FFR character additions
                Originally posted by leonid
                FFR should implement a form of CAPTCHA that filters out not only spambots but also retards.

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                • Flyleef
                  FFR Player
                  • May 2007
                  • 401

                  #23
                  Re: Check out our rap song! It's streaming

                  Originally posted by OnixRose
                  no.
                  Please don't leave useless posts.
                  No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
                  these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
                  If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
                  My heart, filled with loving radiance
                  Is forever thinking of you.

                  These words that we play are a pleasant melody
                  All I want is to have you by my side,
                  so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
                  even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

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                  • BEN.(SPEIRS) 7.5
                    FFR Player
                    FFR Simfile Author
                    • Mar 2007
                    • 559

                    #24
                    Re: Check out our rap song! It's streaming

                    You're 14 and writing songs with titles like (and probably lyrics refering to) Gimme Head.

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                    • Sir_Thomas
                      FFR Veteran
                      • Oct 2005
                      • 848

                      #25
                      Re: Check out our rap song! It's streaming

                      The beat with the bells is off a bit.

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                      • Flyleef
                        FFR Player
                        • May 2007
                        • 401

                        #26
                        Re: Check out our rap song! It's streaming

                        Originally posted by BEN.(SPEIRS) 7.5
                        You're 14 and writing songs with titles like (and probably lyrics refering to) Gimme Head.
                        I didn't make the songs. I only made the beat!



                        My lyrics

                        Life's a dream

                        Life's a hella of dream...
                        girls line up at icecream trucks scoopin ice cream
                        gettin money and at risk for stds
                        the icecream'll melt soon as it gets the heat
                        that might cause a tragedy such as a pregnancy
                        if you dont believe me then you are crazy
                        yall *****s dont know that life is a dream
                        somedays is nightmares and some is so sweet
                        men need to stop playin with girls that 13
                        cuz what gon happen if she get a baby?
                        will the man take of it or will he be lazy?
                        thats what happens when yall dont take no responsibility
                        make one mistake erupts and there go's the scene
                        in case you do wrap it up and you might be clean.
                        breezes make sure no guys put drugs in your drink
                        if they do they can do whatever they want to yo body
                        so check yo self before you break yo self, isnt that..-a-..dream..
                        Last edited by Flyleef; 08-9-2007, 04:56 PM.
                        No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
                        these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
                        If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
                        My heart, filled with loving radiance
                        Is forever thinking of you.

                        These words that we play are a pleasant melody
                        All I want is to have you by my side,
                        so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
                        even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.

                        Comment

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