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Leviathan :: FFR Batch Submission
bmah -
Leviathan -
cittan* [8 / 10]
Nov/Dec 2020
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Just another bms BOF song.
Simfile Folder Name
Leviathan (bmah)Note Count
1245Chart Length
2:11Average NPS
9.952Estimated Difficulty
73.19
First Note
0:06Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -9
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 23 4 - 18Jumps
x 290
Hands
x 52
Quads
x 2
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
41 - 20.50 nps 5 Seconds
92 - 18.40 nps 10 Seconds
154 - 15.40 nps 30 Seconds
391 - 13.03 nps 1 Minute
630 - 10.50 nps
Color Count
x 475 (38.15%)
x 292 (23.45%)
x 10 (0.8%)
x 391 (31.41%)
x 10 (0.8%)
x 55 (4.42%)
x 0 (0%)
x 12 (0.96%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 3:23pm on May 31st, 2021
Leviathan 8
5.370 Strong preference for this to be 3 instead of 4 for PR + to break the anchor
This opening feels a touch aggressive to me (in terms of layering); specifically the graces leading into chords feels somewhat heavy. But acceptable anyways.
35.319 There's a 32nd worth stepping here for the piano
51.603 missing 8th + 16th to piano; technically a jack but may be too soft for that and likely best as just a 2-3 or 3-2
54.172 Tthat 16th jack on the right hand is consistently one of the least enjoyed patterns of rolls-into-hands; if you really want a hand, you can consider removing the last 32nd and doing a [123])
65.781 this one is even worse since it's an actual one-handed minitrill
101.945 In general I'm not a huge fan of 32nd walls like this but it's fine here; this 16th jack leading out of the pattern is also the least intrusive of all the ones so far since it's on the 232
116.945 Jump? If you're concerned about the 8th jump detracting from the isolated 16th melody XX.XX around this area, I'd suggest isolating it to be on one hand so it's a little more obvious (since you have it on 23x23 right now).
File definitely works, main concern is that I think the traditional rolls-into-hands patterning for build-ups unnecessarily detract from the rest of the file which is pretty well made and exemplifies good concern for PR without making unnecessarily jank patterns.
Posted at 5:41pm on June 6th, 2021
"5.370 Strong preference for this to be 3 instead of 4 for PR + to break the anchor"
Think this is a bit weird because then you'd have three up arrows in a row and that doesn't look good for PR.
"This opening feels a touch aggressive to me (in terms of layering); specifically the graces leading into chords feels somewhat heavy. But acceptable anyways."
I'm a bit more of a stickler when it comes to solo piano and number of sounds present. :)
Anti-Ares on FFR may be another example of this.
SELF-NOTE: 34.34s: I misinterpreted this as 24ths...they're actually 32nds.
"35.319 There's a 32nd worth stepping here for the piano"
Good catch!
"51.603 missing 8th + 16th to piano; technically a jack but may be too soft for that and likely best as just a 2-3 or 3-2"
Good catch, but also I explored this more and realized that from 46.67-51.71s there are consistently some quiet but very much present piano minijacks I missed.
"54.172 Tthat 16th jack on the right hand is consistently one of the least enjoyed patterns of rolls-into-hands; if you really want a hand, you can consider removing the last 32nd and doing a [123])"
Oh really? I felt it was one of the more doable patterns out there with the emphasis of the roll and hands being on the right hand columns.
"65.781 this one is even worse since it's an actual one-handed minitrill"
Yeah this one is harder to hit. The pattern itself is simple, but I think the execution is a bit trickier; therefore, I changed it around a bit. I also fiddled around without hands at all, but the emphasis really didn't feel present when I left the hands out. So I changed the roll patterns around and I think it's easier to hit.
"116.945 Jump? If you're concerned about the 8th jump detracting from the isolated 16th melody XX.XX around this area, I'd suggest isolating it to be on one hand so it's a little more obvious (since you have it on 23x23 right now)."
Not sure what you're going about here. I wasn't too concerned about this entire last section. It's basically a simple layering of hi hat 8ths and the synth melody.
Posted at 6:05pm on June 6th, 2021
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1235 => 1245
AVG NPS changed: 9.8721 => 9.95204
Hand Bias changed: -11 => -9
Posted at 9:30pm on August 1st, 2021
I am going to get eliminated by this. shit