Snowdin Town :: FFR Batch Submission
Ultimate Mike7 - Snowdin Town - Toby Fox [7.5 / 10]
Nov/Dec 2020
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https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=140821&page=13
Whoops totally meant to send this for FFRmas this year but laziness struck. I'd think this would go perfectly released alongside Snowy. (Can be a token to Snowy too if so desired.) Also first attempt at color theory!

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Simfile Folder Name

Snowdin Town (Ultimate Mike7)

Note Count

344

Chart Length

1:16

Average NPS

4.6952

Estimated Difficulty

22.99

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -6

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 7

Jumps

x 68

Hands

x 8

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 4

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
5 - 15.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
5 - 10.00 nps 1 Second
9 - 9.00 nps 2 Seconds
15 - 7.50 nps 5 Seconds
32 - 6.40 nps 10 Seconds
58 - 5.80 nps 30 Seconds
161 - 5.37 nps 1 Minute
291 - 4.85 nps

Color Count

x 298 (86.63%)
x 25 (7.27%)
x 7 (2.03%)
x 8 (2.33%)
x 2 (0.58%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 4 (1.16%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.37s0.9s0.9s0.9s0.87s0.63s0.6s0.6s
35
28
21
14
7

Snowdin Town
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- Permissions, sync, metadata good.

- 3.395, 4.292, etc.: These should be jumps in your structure. I'm guessing you omitted them to make room for the 12ths afterward, though I personally don't really feel like they need the extra room--you have significantly tougher stuff later on. However, I leave this to your discretion.
- 20.127: Same pitch as 19.539. Similar issues happen in the following instances of this sound.
- 26.597: The 4ths are an ascending triplet here, try something like 2 3 42 or 2 3 43.
- 28.141: Ghost note
- 61.597: Since you're using additive layering here, this should just be a single, probably on column 2. I'd also recommend moving 62.480 to a [23] jump so these sounds are all put on the same column, matching 63.362.
- 63.362: On the other hand, this should be a jump.
- 63.950: This should be a hand if and only if 64.833 is a hand--the instrumentation is the same, and if anything 64.833 is a slightly more striking sound.
- 66.303: See 61.597 (but column 4 this time).
- 71.009: Interesting choice not putting jumps in this section, but I dig it.

- Tasteful usage of colour theory for the bells. The file is definitely competently done in terms of layering and structure. I'd say its weakest point is the PR, which can be a little inattentive at times; for example, in the intro 0.433 & 1.028 are actually the same sound, and the middle note is the highest of the three jumps. As such I would be inclined to pattern it something like [24] 1 [34] 1 [23]. Outside the stuff I've specifically mentioned, I'd recommend giving the file a general look for repeated notes where there's no repeated sound and patterns descending when they should be ascending (and vice versa). [7.5/10]

Woohoo first accept! Thanks!!! Fixed the file with the notes given. Fixed a color jump to match the other color jumps & general pr fixes in the first quarter.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 335 => 344
AVG NPS changed: 4.57234 => 4.69518
Hand Bias changed: -15 => -14

S'more PR fixes.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: -14 => -6