Sun Son Sunday (Orange Mix)
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- Perms, sync, metadata good.

- The jump usage in this is a little bit IcyWorld. If that's what you're going for, sure I guess, but I feel like this chart would be more interesting and feel closer to the music if you used a less aggressive layering scheme. For instance, in the intro section from 11.020-21.991 you could keep hands as they are & use jumps only to piano, or only to bass guitar. In the 33.306 section, you could limit jumps to vocals (and bass guitar, perhaps).

- 5.363: Please rearrange to get rid of this 8th minijack.
- 10.334: Two different instruments, shouldn't be a minijack. You could get rid of it or just move it down a 16th.
- 12.306: This is followed as a jump at 15.049, 17.791, etc.
- 16.506: 4 repeated [24] jumps, all to different sounds. Also, there's a massive anchor on column 2 that culminates in a minijack. Suggest breaking it up, probably in multiple spots.
- 20.277: More unnecessary anchoring into a minijack. Could make this pattern 2321 instead of 3231 to relieve the column 3 anchor.
- 21.049: This is too soft a sound to warrant the stress of a minijack imo. If you do use one, I'd suggest isolating it a bit more by putting it on column 4.
- 22.677: Column 4 giga-anchor.
- 32.620: Recommend taking some stress off column 2 after those two minijacks.
- 36.049: Column 4 giga-anchor, followed by another long one which ends in a minijack.
- 43.763: You didn't use a minijack at 32.791.
- 45.649, 45.991: What do these go to? Doesn't seem like they fit in your structure. Regardless, this pattern shouldn't be a trill.
- 50.106: No reason for this 8th minijack.
- 54.906: Patterning in these 16ths could be a touch more attentive.
- 72.906: Left handed giga-trill.
- 76.849: One-handed 32nd trills like this should be removed, this part's already tough with two-handed ones.
--> In this particular case, since the minijack before that's not really a minijack, from the previous beat you could do [12] 3 2 1 [34]23.
- 86.791: Suggest removing this first minijack.
- 102.734: Column 1 giga-anchor, with some column 2 minijacks thrown into the mix as well. Oof.

** The jumpstream patterning in this chart feels arbitrary a lot of the time, frequently having several of the same jump in a row to sounds of different pitches & instruments and having massive anchors that don't go to anything in the music. This is particularly noticeable in the second half, where the song provides very clear opportunities for 8th anchors which are not acknowledged at all; instead there are just big ones flying around everywhere, often ending in the middle of those the song merits. This issue is the main thing holding this chart back right now and could be fixed without reducing the layering, but it's a much easier thing to do with a more conservative layering scheme, hint hint. [6/10]