Computer Dreams v2
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- Permissions, sync good.
* Metadata: Change artist to "Nina - Goddess of Dance".

** You follow the hi-hats inconsistently. Why do you follow the one at 4.493, but not the one at 4.279 or 5.350? Similarly 7.921 is followed but not 7.707 or 8.779. Watch out for similar examples, because you consistently omit the same ones--there's just no reason for you to omit them in the first place.

* 10.386: Since this is the only such minijack in the chart, I'd highly recommend finding a different pattern because there's nothing really distinguishing this sound from, say, 6.850.
- 13.493, 13.707: Missing notes, see sections at 10.064 and 6.636.
- 15.207, 16.493, 16.600: Ghost notes
- 20.350, 20.564: Missing notes. Also happens at 27.207, and you follow only the first of the two at 23.779. Given how prominent these are and the fact that you followed them earlier in the chart, their omission feels odd. Look out for future instances of this as well.
- 29.457, 29.779: Missing notes; you've been following these up until now, and there's no reason to leave them out here.
- 30.957: Advise putting these on column 3 to distinguish from the percussion on the 8th just before. This also lets you put 31.600 & 33.314 on column 4 since they're higher than these 8ths.
- 37.600: Missing note, see 34.600 and 35.029.
- 41.029: Missing [13] jump, same sound as 40.600.
- 44.457: Missing 8th.
- 58.386-72.100: You change back and forth in this section between putting jumps to the kicks on the beat and putting jumps to the vocals. Pick one and stick with it--personally, I think jumps to the vocals would be more effective.
- 72.100-78.957: You follow the guitar and the 8th melody both here, but don't get either one with 100% consistency. Either pick one to follow (peferably the guitar, since it's the new element here) or do them both.
- 72.957, 74.671, 76.386, 78.100: Guitar plays here and the next 16th, but not on the 8th. (Keep the 8th if you're following the melody as well.)
- 81.314, 84.743: Not sure why these are jumps.
- 81.743, 81.957: Highly recommend removing--these sounds are all around and these two particular notes are not any stronger than the others, so it doesn't make sense to follow only them. Leaving a break between the notes you have to the vocals is fine. (On the other hand, the two you have at 85.171 and 85.386 are fine because the percussion there is genuinely new.)
- 92.457, 95.886: Missing notes.
- 99.314: Missing jump for vocal.
- 101.457: Ghost note.
- 102.957: Ghost notes.

- This file is plagued by rhythmic errors and odd omissions / ghost notes (and there are a lot of them), but your layering was actually quite well done, nice job on that. Though it needs a substantial clean-up job, I can definitely see this getting accepted once the misrhythms and inconsistencies are resolved. Feel free to message me on Discord if you have any questions. [4.5/10]