The Metal Side of Lance [5]
What's with all these BPM changes at the start? (I'm assuming you tried stepping this at 195bpm normally and it didn't work; why not?)
The LH bias in this intro is kind of rude, but acceptable
23.209 jump if you want guitar to be a jump like 23.825 (my best advice is just don't; you immediately drop layering for it in the jumpstream right after so it's more seamless to make all these singles instead)
25.209-26.286 This part of the stream should show some PR to the guitar even if you aren't layering it in
29.363 I like cute color theory and I can understand dumping this but this is a ~290bpm stream out of nowhere with a hidden cameljack (so 145bpm jack) at the very end. This needs to be toned down quite a bit
31.517 What are the jumps going to in this section? if it's to the snare, there are a fe wmissing like 31.617; if it's also the guitar, 32.440 is also a ghost. And then you drop the jumps on the 8ths pretty soon afterwards beginning 33.517, so this section probably needs a bit of cleanup for consistency
Later on it seems you only step jumps to the guitar, so perhaps sticking to that the whole time may be the solution here I think.
43.209 not sure why this is a hand and you can see how it forces you into very rigid and inappropriate patterning for the ascending guitar here
52.363 quite gross for how insignificant the extra percussion on the 16th is relative to what else is going on musically here
57.979 this part feels quite unrepresentative of the music going on here; really disagree with a whole string of shared [23] columns representing both kick and snare
1.02.748 nice patterning
1.23.056 hand for snare
1.28.440 please no...remember this is ffr and this [34]4334 is very likely going to have at least one 225bpm jack in it
1.52.748 why the anchor here?
2.09.761 ^
2.13.671 rhythm is noticeably inaccurate here; this isn't straight 24ths
2.14.132 ^ (not straight 16ths)
2.14.286 this 4th does not fall on any guitar note
2.14.491 distinctly wrong rhythm here even at 100%, not straight 12ths
2.16.748 wrong rhythm
2.17.209 this is kind of a strange and unnecessarily abrasive way to end this section; a 3-jack going to...the drums? when the guitar, for which the solo is ending here, is descending in pitch
2.40.132 foreground guitar offers interesting opportunities to change up the 111 111 111 anchoring to the background guitar at this point, such as switching the anchor to 333 or 444 for a bit

File has some bright spots and I like that it sticks to its guns in terms of motif development, but there's quite a significant amount of cleanup needed in the solo and to regulate unnecessarily abrasive patterning in general. I know we've talked about this before so feel free to DM me if you'd like to discuss this further - I understand the "abrasive patterning" is just what you like and I respect that dedication, but I personally feel that sometimes this inclination comes at the cost of representing the song at its fullest, as well as detracting from the player experience...I'd feel better if you were giving up just one of those things, but to give up both feels a lot like a file that's made just for yourself, and that's fine, but it's also quite hard to justify going into FFR which has its own established expectations of what files "should "be (which are of course hardly objective, but more like a general acceptance over time.)