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-[00:05.335] Check one-hand minitrill usage (does not align with 00:09.027).

-[00:16.643] Section is quite long as a tech stream, could probably benefit from placement of 4th jumps at measure points so that it feels less monotonous. (Like at 00:16.643, 00:18.489, 00:20.335, 00:22.181, etc.)

-[00:32.076] You can’t be doing this all on one hand, this is essentially a 260bpm 4-note long jack on one hand. Also, check PR. the 16th at 00:31.989 has the same pitch as the 3rd 64th at 00:32.191.

-[00:37.643] Ghost 8th. Remove. Same with at 00:46.412.

-[00:51.027] Missing 16th.

-[00:57.951] 16th stream ends here, on the 16th, not the 8th.

-[00:59.104] There is so much left hand bias here that I don’t even know where to begin with the breakdown of this pattern. I don’t argue that note positions used are likely correct, but it’s way harder than it ever needs to be with the anchoring on left arrow AND the sporadic syncing used. Please level it out to something manageable. I can guarantee PR does not work for all notes in that left column.

-[01:13.874] Rather like this section, found that it was handled tastefully.

-[01:21.489] PR is off. This 8th [12] is not the same as the following 16th [12]. I’m not even sure if it constitutes a jump to be quite honest. I’d probably either do 3[12][124] or [34] at a minimum. Same thing at 01:25.181, but louder.

-[01:26.797] I actually prefer what you did with jumps at 01:34.181 for this section instead of simple 8th jumps here. Either way, sections need to match.

-[01:28.874, 01:32.566] Repeating/recurring issue from above, but in a separate note matter.

-[01:35.104] Single notes in this section do not sync up. Check your sync.

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-[01:52.412] Similar thing happens here as the previous note.

-[01:57.258] PR check on the 24ths? Pretty sure the first up arrows do not share PR with the last up arrow in each part here.

-[02:00.258] Again, it really feels like the right anchor here is for difficulty, and not for the song, and could be handled a lot more tastefully by cutting back on right hand bias & sharing the anchor between both hands.

-[02:01.642] PR is ascending upwards but the pattern is rolling downwards. Happens also at 02:02.566, 02:03.374, and 02:04.354.

-[02:07.758] Missing a crucial 16th & 4th starting here, from the guitar.

-[02:20.104, 02:28.874] Repeat 8ths that do not exist. Remove.

-[02:54.489] This is a lot of right hand stress for such a long jack. Can we not do jacks on 1 & 3 for PR instead?

-[03:01.874] Ok, you’re already doing 1’s & 3’s for jacks, can PR shift for previous note.

-[03:09.258] Shouldn’t jacks be on the other side, for PR? Columns 2 & 4.

-[03:14.220] Going to be sincerely honest, I don’t even hear the 32nds here. Both at 100% and 50% speed. If it has to do with the guitar slides, then this is for difficulty again, which it really doesn’t need directly at the end of a 3 minute file.

-[03:16.697] First iteration of white notes at the end is kind of pushing it for difficulty. There’s 4 notes here for sound, it should probably use 4 notes. Not 3 jumps and a single. The rest of the ending can stay as-is tbh.

-Needs a lot of work. There are a few sections that are relatively clean & don’t need changes (or very minor changes), but majority of sections are lacking a recurring issue, or are getting held back by spikes in difficulty or PR. Fix & re-submit to the next available batch?