Cristalisia
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* Change offset from -1.806 to -1.815. Notes given under these timestamps.

- 6.181: Missing note--flow does not need to be broken here
- 16.256: Missing note
- 17.823, 19.614, 22.076, etc: Missing note
- 26.218: Not sure why you follow the 16th after, but not this.
- 29.688-30.024: PR is nonexistent here, please fix.
- 40.211: Suggest 1[23] to distinguish from the previous [13]2.
- 44.129: Having a straight roll here is a bit of a boring decision since the music has more to offer--it especially stands out against the other 24ths which are patterned really well imo. You might consider a pattern like this: https://i.imgur.com/HxS4vPJ.png
- 45.360: Missing note
- 65.845: Why no jump here, but jumps at 66.293, 66.517? (Also, the layering in this section feels overdone to me... there wouldn't be anything wrong with just following the piano for this interlude.)
- 69.987: Missing 32nd.
- 76.144: Technically these last three are 64ths.
- 81.293: This jump is really, really faint, suggest using a single. Also, since you predominantly follow the piano in this section, omitting the 16ths at 80.957 & 81.181 is strange. Similar comment at 88.233.
- 83.728, 90.864, etc: This is on the 64th (48th if you want no chance of poor conversion)
- 93.494: Suggest changing this jump to something other than [12] to distinguish from previous jump.
- 109.502: Missing 8th.
- 113.308: Again, since you're predominantly following piano, I suggest using a jump here and following the next 16th, possibly removing the 8th (e.g. [13]2 [34])
- 116.890: Missing piano jump.
- 120.024-124.950: You layered the percussion much more heavily in the 55.547-58.681 section, making this part feel sort of empty by comparison.
- 123.271: Could argue a 16th note here.
- 125.957: Inarguably a missing 16th here.

- I really enjoyed the 24th patterning in this, nice job on that. However, the chart has several conspicuous missing notes and inconsistencies in how you follow the piano which should be resolved first. CQ on sync & that category of notes. [7/10]

Cristalisia
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- Still not understanding 81.293 (resp. 88.457, 113.531)--it's either misplaced or inconsistent. The piano is on the 16th before, and as far as I can tell the sound that actually occurs on the 8th is identical to 81.740, which you don't follow. Fixes are otherwise good to go, but I really do think you should change this.
(also another minor nitpick I noticed is that 81.516 should be followed at 88.681)