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WirryWoo - Back Out - RiraN [8 / 10]
Nov/Dec 2020
PublicEvents
Released
http://manbow.nothing.sh/event/page/bofxvi/teamlist20/kprof.cgi?idx=59
BMS Open Source permissions.

Good tournament file for D3 or D4.

Simfile Folder Name

Back Out (WirryWoo)

Note Count

1184

Chart Length

3:32

Average NPS

9.5024

Estimated Difficulty

66.17

First Note

1:28

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -38

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 0

Jumps

x 268

Hands

x 110

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
40 - 20.00 nps 5 Seconds
85 - 17.00 nps 10 Seconds
135 - 13.50 nps 30 Seconds
356 - 11.87 nps 1 Minute
631 - 10.52 nps

Color Count

x 584 (49.32%)
x 277 (23.4%)
x 2 (0.17%)
x 247 (20.86%)
x 3 (0.25%)
x 53 (4.48%)
x 1 (0.08%)
x 16 (1.35%)
x 1 (0.08%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.77s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s
35
28
21
14
7

Back Out
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- Permissions, metadata good.
* Sync is slightly late, change offset -1.586 -> -1.578. Timestamps given with -1.578 offset.

- 6.135, 9.173, 12.211, 15.249: These repeated notes feel strange and avoidable in terms of PR.
- 12.116: Missing 32nd.
- 36.135, 87.781: Not much of a fan of the column 4 jack here. The 8th should arguably not even be part of it because there's no vocal there, but you can't really avoid that without creating other problems. As such, I'd suggest moving 36.325 to column 3 both because it's lower than the following two "music" syllables and because it generally demarcates the end of the section.
- 42.875: Misrhythm, should be on the 16th just before.
- 46.198, 47.717, etc.: Distinctly lower than 46.483, suggest moving to column 3. Matches with 46.768 as well.
- 57.211, 130.122: Surprised to not see a "minijack" here to create tension, e.g. 3[23].
- 68.413: Recommend moving off column 4, not much reason for this to conflict with the split jumptrill just prior.
- 94.521: This feels like a ghost note, or if anything like it should be on the 8th instead.

- Dang, this is a huge step away from the kinds of charts I usually associate with you (i.e. Passage D, Obscene Amount of Steam, Beautiful Arrythmia) but it's pretty well done too. The vocals to the jacks were a nice choice, I particularly liked the patterning with the hands during the buildups. Found the rolls hard, but I'm 99% sure that's a personal thing. I had a few notes about patterning and found a couple isolated misrhythms, but overall it's good stuff. [8/10]

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1182 => 1184
Chart Length changed: 2:13 => 3:32
AVG NPS changed: 9.48636 => 9.50241
First Delay changed: 0:09 => 1:28
Hand Bias changed: -14 => -38

Edited file with all recommendations provided (agreed with all your points, thanks!)