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storn42 - Save Our Last Goodbye - Disturbed [7.5 / 10]

Nov/Dec 2020

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Released

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showthread.php?t=140821

Simfile Folder Name

Save Our Last Goodbye (Storn42)

Note Count

2126

Chart Length

5:02

Average NPS

7.1663

Estimated Difficulty

65.52

First Note

0:05

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -8

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 86

Jumps

								x 537
							

Hands

								x 92
							

Quads

								x 13
							

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
11 - 22.00 nps 1 Second
18 - 18.00 nps 2 Seconds
32 - 16.00 nps 5 Seconds
71 - 14.20 nps 10 Seconds
140 - 14.00 nps 30 Seconds
359 - 11.97 nps 1 Minute
590 - 9.83 nps

Color Count

x 956 (44.97%)

x 792 (37.25%)

x 14 (0.66%)

x 237 (11.15%)

x 6 (0.28%)

x 29 (1.36%)

x 37 (1.74%)

x 0 (0%)

x 55 (2.59%)

Largest Note Gaps

5.43s5.17s4.47s2.73s1.63s1.6s1.6s1.47s

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Note Count changed: 2127 => 2128
AVG NPS changed: 7.16966 => 7.17303
Hand Bias changed: -5 => -6

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- Perms, sync good.
- Credits section of metadata should be blank or your FFR username.

- 75.710: Missing jump.
- 115.710: I found these one-handed flams in jacks to be a little awkward to play.
* 182.969: This colour scheme is hella convoluted, and while it makes sense technically, it's a complete mess visually. Strongly suggest toning it down a notch. (To be clear I'm referring to this one pattern and its transition into the cyans, not the whole section from here on.)
--> That said, I do have a note on the cyans too: I recommend using some other colour (like green) since at 189.954 there is an actual non-colour theory cyan note just 0.2 seconds after a colour theory cyan note.
- 198.610: Both guitar and percussion are lower than next jump, suggest [12][13].
- 222.145: Having this be white is fine for accenting, but I don't like it being a quad. There's no other instrumentation here, just a vocal, so it's technically inconsistent; moreover, you use actual quads that make sense in the layering and this is clearly a step beneath them in intensity. Lastly, the syllable is not very sharp since the "s" phoneme starts around 0.2 seconds earlier, and is hence not that impactful. Suggest jump, or even a single.
- 254.255: Would like a [13] to acknowledge guitar PR.
- 276.029: This jack pattern is really aggressive and the guitar here is a little lower than on the previous hand, so suggest [123] to reduce right hand bias & improve PR.

- Well done chart technically, and I do really like the chorus sections, but I can't help but feel the chart is a little draggy--a very large portion of this (5 minute long) chart is just anchored single-note jacks with jumps and hands coming off them. The song is pretty good and does some work in keeping it interesting, though. [7.5/10]

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- 75.710: Missing jump.
fixed

- 115.710: I found these one-handed flams in jacks to be a little awkward to play.
moved the harder ones

* 182.969: This colour scheme is hella convoluted, and while it makes sense technically, it's a complete mess visually. Strongly suggest toning it down a notch. (To be clear I'm referring to this one pattern and its transition into the cyans, not the whole section from here on.)
--> That said, I do have a note on the cyans too: I recommend using some other colour (like green) since at 189.954 there is an actual non-colour theory cyan note just 0.2 seconds after a colour theory cyan note.
yea, totally agree. I've changed all the colored jumps into one color similar to how i did 2:57.645. fixes the problem nicely.
that last cyan is also a mistake, it should be white, which should reduce the problem.

- 198.610: Both guitar and percussion are lower than next jump, suggest [12][13].
I'd normally agree with this, but there are a lot of really annoying chart implications that require a significant part of the chart to be repatterned to fit this in.

- 222.145: Having this be white is fine for accenting, but I don't like it being a quad. There's no other instrumentation here, just a vocal, so it's technically inconsistent; moreover, you use actual quads that make sense in the layering and this is clearly a step beneath them in intensity. Lastly, the syllable is not very sharp since the "s" phoneme starts around 0.2 seconds earlier, and is hence not that impactful. Suggest jump, or even a single.
I've just removed the note entirely

- 254.255: Would like a [13] to acknowledge guitar PR.
The guitar is kind of in the background for this section. The jack for the snare is more important to me than guitar PR here

- 276.029: This jack pattern is really aggressive and the guitar here is a little lower than on the previous hand, so suggest [123] to reduce right hand bias & improve PR.
i change it to a [123] and now its a left hand heavy section. I think a majority of players (including me) would prefer a right heavy section to a left. Additionally, idk if PR even plays a part here. i'm pretty sure everything stays the same pitch here. I can atleast move the 434 to a 121 to make it less right heavy, ever so slightly

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