The Bird's Snapshot Lifespan
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- Perms, sync, metadata good.

- 9.451: Not the same instrument as previous note, which is also on column 3. Suggest column 1.
- 10.891: Sound increases significantly in intensity here, suggest making the 48ths into a roll that transitions on the 8th to a splitroll (e.g. 1234 to 4132).
- 13.051, 20.731, etc.: These seem a little silly to me. The sounds are high enough frequency that they basically sound like constant tones; plus, at 5.371 when this happened alongside other stuff it wasn't followed. Would personally just follow it with a jump or hand at the start and no wall.
- 18.331: You don't force a 3-note jack on the entry to the 48ths at 26.011 or 33.691, suggest changing this one.
- 32.971: Decidedly tougher roll pattern than at 25.291 or 17.611 without any musical justification, suggest bringing this in line.
- 35.131: Same jump as previous, but different sound.
- 39.211: Would prefer a trill here--this minijack pattern is too aggressive for the sound imo. Similar comment holds at 43.651, 54.571, 59.011, etc. Use discretion though; imo it's pretty distinct at 86.791 so I think that one's fine.
- 42.271: What you have here is fair, but to accent that the sound you're following as jumps changes here I would make this a single and switch the last jump (e.g. [14][23][14]2[34]). Similar comment at 57.451.
- 49.651: I like these minijacks, but suggest moving them to different columns (e.g. 44233) to ease up on the right hand slightly.
- 51.931: If you do keep the 64th walls, this transition is a bit much.
- 53.851: This pattern flows really weirdly, may want to make it a bit more intuitive.
- 56.131: You continued with 48ths until the beat at 40.771, make them consistent. (Personally prefer this instance without the 48ths since they get obscured by the 64ths.)
- 57.901: You omitted this at 42.541, make these consistent.
- 60.091: Strange forced 16th minijack.
- 68.731: Suggest [23] to avoid collision in column 1.
- 91.471, 91.711: While technically there, these are soft enough that I'd recommend removing them.
- 104.371: Recommend removing minijack--it's soft, these don't sound exactly the same, and this part is already hard as balls anyway. Similar comment at 112.051, 119.731, etc. (Note: There are kinda two types of minijacks in this latter half, represented by 141.091 and 142.771. Of these I think the .091 is fine and .771 isn't.)
- 106.891: Suggest column 2 for this for better transition out of the OHT.
- 113.611: OHT is a little much for the sound imo.
- 114.331, 129.69, etc.: This jack is 3/64ths, not 24ths.
- 115.291: The buzzes come in here, so only following them starting the next beat doesn't make much sense--recommend changing this to resemble 130.651.
- 133.831: Missing note.
- 137.451: This minitrill is a bit intense.
** 146.491: Please make this a bit less obscenely fast lol.

- As a general note, I suggest isolating the minijacks a little bit more where possible; there are times where they lead into already reasonably difficult patterns on the same hand and it's pretty rough.
- I really really dig the anchory patterns in the second half of this, great job on those. It's also hard as hell lmao. I had many small comments about technical inconsistencies or minor difficulty spikes, but the vast majority of my comments were just those. CQ on 146.491 & general cleanup; the most important notes are those regarding the minijacks, though. [6.5/10]