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Paladin :: FFR Batch Submission
Telnaior -
Paladin -
EnV [6.5 / 10]
Sept/Oct 2020
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Rejected
https://ffr.fandom.com/wiki/Envy
Artist has given blanket permission, and is listed in the Permissions List thread as "Envy".
My first stepchart, and a resubmission of http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/batch_submission/batch/?id=665.
Updates since the previous version: Fixed sync; Minor restepping of some patterns in accordance with advice given; Cut file to two minutes to avoid repetition (ending after the first chorus as is typical for rhythm games)
My first stepchart, and a resubmission of http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/batch_submission/batch/?id=665.
Updates since the previous version: Fixed sync; Minor restepping of some patterns in accordance with advice given; Cut file to two minutes to avoid repetition (ending after the first chorus as is typical for rhythm games)
Simfile Folder Name
Paladin (Telnaior)Note Count
669Chart Length
2:03Average NPS
5.9379Estimated Difficulty
49.88
First Note
0:10Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x 1
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 39 4 - 26Jumps
x 153
Hands
x 0
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 0
Color Hands
x 0
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second6 - 18.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
8 - 16.00 nps 1 Second
12 - 12.00 nps 2 Seconds
21 - 10.50 nps 5 Seconds
50 - 10.00 nps 10 Seconds
93 - 9.30 nps 30 Seconds
250 - 8.33 nps 1 Minute
441 - 7.35 nps
Color Count
x 219 (32.74%)
x 288 (43.05%)
x 1 (0.15%)
x 160 (23.92%)
x 1 (0.15%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
Posted at 9:35pm on May 12th, 2021
Paladin
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- Metadata good.
** Change offset from -0.055 to -0.110. Timestamps given under this change.
- 37.033: Pretty significant column 2 bias here, recommend mirroring this each phrase (i.e. at 37.956, 38.879, 39.802) instead of just repeating it four times.
- 40.725-44.418: The PR in this section feels very arbitrary, please give it another look. (Everything before this was well done though!)
- 44.418: Could definitely use a jump here.
- 53.418, 68.187, etc.: The sounds in this minijack aren't exactly the same, a split jumptrill might be more fitting here.
- 59.879, 60.110: Why are these not jumps when the two at 60.341 are?
- 60.572: Roll is a bit odd for PR here, suggest a trill on columns 1 and 4 (and rearranging the jumps afterward to avoid a minijack).
** 75.802: At this point, you start following the repeating 1231 rhythm on the beat. This is fine, but it does cause some PR conflicts which you should try to avoid where possible; for example, 76.725 is between two 8ths on the same column which both go to different sounds. Similar comment at 79.956. At 81.110, the opposite problem happens where an 8th is sandwiched between two notes to the new melody. In general I recommend removing any conflict which forces a jack longer than 2 notes or is adjacent to a minijack.
- 89.879: You used jumps in each previous iteration of this--why stop here?
** 90.110: Very spiky jack. Not only is every other jack in the chart 2 notes compared this one being 5, but there is another right-handed jack leading into this. Please nerf this--a one-handed trill would be best imo, probably moving the previous jack to the left hand as well.
** 92.302, 93.341, etc.: These minijacks aren't actual repeated sounds, and are quite spiky in the scope of the chart. Please remove them.
- 92.649: This pattern stands out because it's pretty much just a trill, and you have more going on every other time.
- 112.610: Not a minijack.
- I feel like you neglect the beat a bit in this chart. It's clearly intentional and you do it consistently, so it's fine, but I do feel like including it as singles in spots like 46.725, 47.187, and 106.264 would help tie the chart together.
- Is this your first chart? It's pretty well done, particularly the first half. The jacks in the second half are quite spiky, though, and need to be toned down significantly, and the sync absolutely needs to be fixed. CQ on **'d notes. [6.5/10]
Posted at 9:43pm on September 30th, 2021
No fixes submitted