Debut 8
14.297 - this and the following 16th in the next beat - minor but personally prefer them to be on column 2 for a bit of distinction between these sounds and those in the previous 2 beats.
29.618 for your consideration: a hand
42.261 solid patterning on the 192nds connecting before & after
68.297 excellent catch *not* stepping the 8th after
68.832 there's certainly one here though?
69.154, 69.582 not quite sure what these two go to when there's an audible melody one at 69.368 that gets completely ignored
88.118 consider a minijack to the vocal here for some spice? Just sort of looking for ways to make this a bit more lively than the previous repeat because this part already repeated for like 20 seconds earlier and there's vocals now, so something should be notably different ideally
96.475 lol +1
103.190 as much as I appreciate changing it up here the synth isn't playing a 12; it sounds like just straight 16ths. you can step the slightly hard to hear note at 103.111 though.
115.332, 115.761, 116.618, 117.745 - consider hands here? You don't have to do it when the jacks come in afterwards but would be nice to reflect a climax + incorporate the new addition to the well-established patterning at this point.
Nice chart, makes a tasty meal out of the 3/16 motifs going on throughout the song.