Robot Gypsy Jazz :: FFR Batch Submission

https://freemusicarchive.org/music/John_Bartmann/Public_Domain_Soundtrack_Music_Album_One/robot-gypsy-jazz

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Robot Gypsy Jazz 7.5

8.781 excellent catch
13.117 falls on 32nd after
19.341 missing
28.626 ghost?
38.931 missing
46.227 missing
48.624 would like to see this moved off [23] as this is quite a different percussion you're layering the jump to from the previous [23]
53.521 ^
53.700 missing

Cute chart. Layering is a bit tricky here (unusual that certain instruments are only reflected as jumps if they clash with a vocal, otherwise not charted at all) - but works decently. Given that your layering is extremely narrowly-focused here I think it'd be nice to pay attention to the vocalizations and how you pattern around them a bit more, I think. I know the ... lyrics, such as they are, are not clear, but e.g. something like 12.913: the robot is singing something close to ABABABC here, and I think it'd be great if the arrows to roughly follow that too. Or at 16.586 when it's ABAB (starting on this vocalization). You do this well elsewhere, e.g. 21.483 on something that can be ambiguously interpreted as AABB/ABAB (choosing the more interesting pattern amongst the two).

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Super busy rn I'll send in tweaks later!

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Thanks for notes!!

Robot Gypsy Jazz 7.5

8.781 excellent catch // :3
13.117 falls on 32nd after // Tweaked the sync here rather than change the colours
19.341 missing // Don't agree here; voice is missing. Left as is
28.626 ghost? // No there's voice here
38.931 missing // No voice here? I may just be working with a different version of the file where I already fixed this stuff lol idk
46.227 missing // ehhhhhhhhhh... prefer to keep following clarinet
48.624 would like to see this moved off [23] as this is quite a different percussion you're layering the jump to from the previous [23]
53.521 ^ // Changed both these instances to jumptrills
53.700 missing // ??? I'll ignore this?

Cute chart. Layering is a bit tricky here (unusual that certain instruments are only reflected as jumps if they clash with a vocal, otherwise not charted at all) - but works decently. Given that your layering is extremely narrowly-focused here I think it'd be nice to pay attention to the vocalizations and how you pattern around them a bit more, I think. I know the ... lyrics, such as they are, are not clear, but e.g. something like 12.913: the robot is singing something close to ABABABC here, and I think it'd be great if the arrows to roughly follow that too. Or at 16.586 when it's ABAB (starting on this vocalization). You do this well elsewhere, e.g. 21.483 on something that can be ambiguously interpreted as AABB/ABAB (choosing the more interesting pattern amongst the two). // This is definitely a technique I'll try in other files. Especially ones with more clearly defined melody. As is I think the file does a fairly good job of what you're describing.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 401 => 404
AVG NPS changed: 6.67962 => 6.72959
Hand Bias changed: 15 => 16

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