What I Want :: FFR Batch Submission
gold stinger - What I Want - The Living Tombstone [6 / 10]
Sept/Oct 2020
PublicEvents
Rejected
http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273001&postcount=2
Guitar/Rap bop.

Simfile Folder Name

What I Want (gold stinger)

Note Count

1260

Chart Length

3:29

Average NPS

6.1384

Estimated Difficulty

38.54

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 30

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 0

Jumps

x 213

Hands

x 7

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
5 - 15.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
7 - 14.00 nps 1 Second
13 - 13.00 nps 2 Seconds
22 - 11.00 nps 5 Seconds
42 - 8.40 nps 10 Seconds
82 - 8.20 nps 30 Seconds
223 - 7.43 nps 1 Minute
423 - 7.05 nps

Color Count

x 629 (49.92%)
x 562 (44.6%)
x 18 (1.43%)
x 33 (2.62%)
x 8 (0.63%)
x 3 (0.24%)
x 7 (0.56%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.73s0.7s0.7s0.7s0.53s0.53s0.53s0.53s
35
28
21
14
7

What I Want
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- Sync, permissions, metadata good.

2.326: Why is this omitted?
8.855, 14.502, etc.: Why are these jumps, but not 7.620, 8.326, etc.?
26.855: Missing note to main melody
29.502: Missing jump
30.914, 36.561: You're not typically following isolated hi-hats before this; I'd advise either removing these or (if you want to change the structure) adding one at 34.796
47.149: Higher than the next 8th
52.708: Ghost 16th; the vocals are just 8ths, and there's not even any vocal clipping or anything. You could maybe accent this with a flam leading into the 8th just before, but given the target difficulty of this file I'd just do a single tbh.
52.973, 55.973, 57.737: Missing note to vocals
54.826: There's a slight bend here, but it's very slight; feels like a ghost note when playing. I can't understand why you'd follow this but not 52.973 or 55.973 tbh.
58.267: If you're following the guitar at 57.914, why not here too?
66.649, 82.002: Another confusing 16th
70.973: Descending, not an 8th minijack
78.679: Syllable is actually marginally before the 16th at .649 here, recommend moving to 16th
95.414: Missing 16th; you follow this at 83.414
97.884-118.796: This section is a repeat of 52.708-70.973 and has the same problems.
121.796: Why a note here but not 120.384?
133.267: There's only one bend here, straight 16ths don't make a whole lot of sense. 3/32nds might fit better.
136.796-137.502: There's some interesting stuff going on here, surprised you didn't follow it
138.973: Should be on the previous 48th
139.620: Missing note--basically the same thing as 140.326
139.973: Descending, not minijack
141.914: Fine if you want to avoid the potential difficulty spike, but it wouldn't be out of place to have a jump to the crash here.
143.149: This should be a 12th triplet starting at 143.031. The one you have at 143.384 goes to nothing.
186.561: Why a jump?
194.414: Another very soft 16th that feels like a ghost note when playing. Recommend removing, unless you wanna add them everywhere like 193.708 as well.

- Several strange misrhythms and omissions detract from what's otherwise a pleasant easier file. Intermediate players might struggle with the density in some parts, but that's what the meta is shifting towards anyway, it's not actually an issue at all. The solo is also pretty fun. However, the file needs a lot more polish before it goes into FFR. [6/10]