TC_Halogen - 8.5/10
- offset is good
- 38.692: given that you’ve expressed a bit of a “cooldown” structure with the bursts where they reduce in intensity based on their volume, the bursts in this section could potentially be reduced to the same colored variety that you had earlier
- not a fan of the fluency of the ending jumpglut/structures, but it certainly works
- very well done

Wiosna - 8.5/10
really tasteful use of 28ths! i really appreciate it a lot

21.692 - should probably be on column 4 to avoid a minijack to the [13]
24.025 - ^
26.359 - ^
34.829 - wouldn't make this a double personally
38.692/etc. - would make these bursts 28ths, these are a bit spiky given how calm this section is
58.539/etc. - these bursts are a bit long, and because of that i feel that these bursts should be a bit more comfortable than the other bursts pattern-wise. given that, some of the bursts here have 10-12 note split rolls, which, are pretty easy to hit, are a bit uncomfortable because you are utilising the same motion for a relatively long time. i would shorten the split roll parts to about 7-8 notes and make the rest more rolly instead of split rolly. i'll leave it up to you though, because i think this is relatively minor

in general the jumpgluts in the second half are fine, though i personally would like to see fewer hidden 3[34]/2[21]/4[34] patterns in the chart because i think it doesn't really give the minijacks quite the right "feel" for sounds like this. i would use 11/22/33/44 motions rather than the ones i've mentioned if possible, but [12]1/other variants are also fair game. given how the synth sounds for the minijacks (which are quite clicky and thin), i would prefer the minijacks to utilise more precise finger motion than full on wrist motion (which normally is used for [12]/[34] patterns). these are quite minor but i think it gives this section a slightly more appropriate texture, especially since the layering in this section is additive.

Cool chart! Not many structural "errors", but I do think that the chart structure can be refined here and there. This is a very fair chart with mostly comfortable patterning, and there is a good amount of reserve whenever necessary (especially notable in the first third of the chart) as is, so accepting this is a no-brainer. I just would prefer a slightly easier calm section and slightly different patterning for the second half of the chart, but that isn’t strictly necessary.