C204 (Shadow_God & XelNya) [7.0/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync looks good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> ‘.sm.old’ file found within the submission folder. Suggest removing. No other issues found in submission folder contents.

-”P.S: If you're looking for permissions, Pretty Girls With Mental Disorders is already in game and is also by Helblinde”. That’s not necessarily how permissions work, but we do have blanket permissions for Helblinde in the permissions thread, so this is good to go.

-[00:09.616] 4th here should be in the right column for that anchoring on the high pitch. If you’re not anchoring for that high pitch, then the 4th at 00:09.902 should not be in the right column.

-[00:14.188] If anchored like this, 00:09.616 should match or vice versa.

-[00:20.902] Missing 8th.

-[00:32.473] Bit of a suggestion here, since vocals are following a jumpglut progression here, this [12] 4th jump should be move to a 13 to create a noticeable difference that this isn’t following vocals, but drums. Few other spots specifically in this part that would help support the rhythm in the section this way.

-[00:41.045] Not really seeing the reasoning behind the 8th being positioned as a minijack coming out of the jump in this fashion.

-[00:59.902] Layering jumps to drums every other 4th in this section dictates that this shouldn’t be a jump.

-[01:03.045 & 01:03.616] Fill in the 4ths as jumps here. I don’t mind if you keep the 8th going into the hand as-is, or move it away from the jump and cause a minijack into the hand.

-[01:07.616] Jump, preferably something not [13] as to reinforce PR from the previous 4th jump.

-[01:35.521, 01:43.521, 01:44.664] Swap up the positioning of these 12ths to the other hand so you’re not forcing 4-5 note long jack chains on one hand. Rest of the jacks in this section balance it out between two hands fine.

-[01:54.188] This ending is a fair amount difficult, given the file is at 210bpm. Not much I can suggest to remedy how this section is layered, but keep in mind the isolated patterns that are being forced on each hand for extended amounts of time.

-a few consistency errors, and layering problems but nothing that can’t be easily fixed in about 5-10 minutes. CQ with particular attention towards timestamps [01:35.521 etc.], [00:59.902], [00:20.902], and the anchoring at the beginning of the file.