Rebirth of Mars (Qrrbrbirbel) [7.0/10]
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-[00:00.148] Notes start way too early for anyone to properly hear what they’re playing. First audible bit starts at 00:01.881 (on a 12th). My suggestion, cut the notes at the beginning so that they start at the 4th on 00:03.348 at the earliest (4-bar long breather from first heard note) for these sort of eased in repetition patterns that are hard to discern at first.

-[00:38.947] 48th flam (like 00:38.147 before this note) instead of the 24th.

-[00:48.147] 24ths here are very hard to hear on 100% speed over cymbal crashes. Personally, I would’ve just stuck to 12ths, and kept the hands if you wanted to keep the hands to cymbal crashes.

-[01:42.347 & 01:43.147] Ghost 8ths, remove.

-[02:16.748] Check jumpglut consistency across sections (first one here has minijack into 4th, next one is minijack into 16th, next one is connected, etc.)

-[02:20.347] This is not a jack. Works fine as a 23[12][34].

-[02:22.648] Really good section, but your 4ths here are landing on 16ths for the duration of the entire section up until 03:06.547, and needs to be re-synced so jumps like the ones at 02:24.948 are 4ths instead of 16ths.

-[02:59.447] Unintended minijack? Just use it like the one at 03:01.048.

-[04:21.240] No need to force the 261bpm minijack here, especially 4 and a half minutes into the chart. Just move it to left column so that it still has that impact for being on one-hand, without the strain in a slow section like this.

-[04:34.200] Again, another example of where the minijack is kind of unwarranted. Works fine by itself as stream into the jump, there really isn’t much there at all PR-wise for the minijack to be here.

-[04:40.148] Personal preference, move this 4th single to a different column to exercise PR on the high note for the guitar.

-[05:00.493] Holy right hand stress, batman.

-[05:02.906] 12ths instead of 8th here, permission to stress granted.

-Missing a few other guitar whines like the one above, like at 05:08.941, and 05:09.803 -> 05:10.493. If you’re mapping them out, place them out. Otherwise, remove them.

-[05:32.900] Songs already super strung out as it is. Normally I would’ve asked for the cut at 03:51.052, but the ending really does justice to the song. That being said, cut the last two 16ths after this one, and end the song on this note.

-I actually really like it. I’m not too much of a fan of the level of minijacks happening in the first half of the chart due to PR, but the rest of the chart plays out particularly well. CQ, but just needs the section in the middle re-synced so that 4ths are properly landing to drums, rather than 16ths (See note 02:22.648) and the intro. Some small improvements can be used here and there throughout the file as well, but the main issue is the sync, and the intro.

-[01:42.347 & 01:43.147] never looked at?

-[05:00.493] When I said 'Holy right hand stress, batman', I meant that it could use less stress on the right hand for a pattern that shows up 5 minutes into the file, not restructured to be intentional one-handed 24ths at 174bpm to BOTH hands. Now instead of holy right hand stress, it's holy BOTH hand stress.

Please just, change 05:00.493 to anything that doesn't induce pain to look at 5 minutes into the file and it would be fine. Hit me up if you need to.