Shanghai Teahouse
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- Perms, sync, and metadata good.

- 5.484: Lower than the previous 8th.
- 11.897: Doesn't fit in your layering scheme, not part of the main electric guitar melody. On the other hand 15.158 should be followed but isn't.
- 14.506: Higher than both the next 8th and 14.180, suggest column 3.
- 15.484: Suggest moving this or the previous note off column 1 because there's no repeated sound here.
- 29.615: Guitar is ascending here & percussion isn't exactly the same in this minijack, so suggest [23][24][134].
- 48.093, 51.571, etc.: While not technically wrong, the repeated note caused by PRing to percussion here feels odd to play when there's also a melody going on in which these two notes are distinctly lower than the ones directly before. They stand out even more because you PR to the melody at 57.441.
- 53.693: [24] jump to melody wouldn't be remiss here, but I understand if you want to keep the focus on the minijack here.
- 61.897, 68.854: Missing notes
- 69.252: Should be on the 16th, not the 12th.
- 89.723: There's no repeating sound here.
- 98.528: Nice attention to detail with the PR here.
- 103.093, 104.397, 108.310, 113.093, etc.: No repeating sound here.

** I'm going to stop listing these individually here, but check your minijack usage throughout the file. Many of them are questionable, and it detracts from the "real" ones.

- 110.702: Missing jump
- 113.093: Lots of right hand bias starting here without much of a musical justification, suggest moving 113.673 to column 2 to mitigate this. You could also sneak in a jump at 113.745.
- 121.897: Missing note.
- 123.093: Another minijack where there's no repeating sound; I point this one out in particular because it's very avoidable and this is already one of the tougher parts of the chart without it.
- 127.550: This jump should be on the previous 8th.
* 129.615: Yikes. By far the toughest jack pattern in the file, please change this jump to not be one-handed (e.g. [13]).
- 159.180-159.397: Guitar is 24ths here, not 16ths.

- Fun chart with some pretty nice details put into it--I noticed some pretty attentive PR at times, and the way you escalated the layering in the second half was quite well done. However, I don't think it's *quite* ready to go in yet, and that's mostly because of the minijacks--with a song like this you can get away with fudging them a little bit, but there are some pretty glaring examples of minijacks that shouldn't be minijacks in this chart which need to be resolved first. Also, while I strongly suggest you change 129.615, I won't CQ you on it. Just be advised keeping it isn't likely to net you any points with the players. [7/10]

(A note: I'm sorry to give you a rating this much lower than the one you received last time you submitted the chart, but I truly do think that my rating is fair, and I hope my review is enough to convince you that it is too. Please DM me if there's anything I can clarify / that you'd like to discuss.)

15.484: Huh, you're right. Maybe I accidentally moved it to column 1 when playing around with patterns. Sorry about that, don't worry about that note.
53.693: My bad, I meant 53.963--it's the third in a sequence of four melody notes.

That said, file's good to go--you can still make those fixes if you want, but you don't have to.