A Relic in Memory (FFR CUT) :: FFR Batch Submission
HammyMcSquirrel - A Relic in Memory (FFR CUT) - HammyMcSquirrel [6.5 / 10]
Sept/Oct 2020
Public
Rejected
http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4741400&postcount=238
The song is a remix of Rusty Ruin Zone from Sonic 3D Blast. I purposely made the file easier than it could be, although it's not much below the song's potential in difficulty.

Simfile Folder Name

A Relic in Memory (FFR Cut) (HammyMcSquirrel)

Note Count

175

Chart Length

1:58

Average NPS

1.5187

Estimated Difficulty

8.83

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:03

Hand Bias

x -1

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 0

Jumps

x 0

Hands

x 0

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
3 - 9.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
4 - 8.00 nps 1 Second
7 - 7.00 nps 2 Seconds
8 - 4.00 nps 5 Seconds
16 - 3.20 nps 10 Seconds
29 - 2.90 nps 30 Seconds
73 - 2.43 nps 1 Minute
112 - 1.87 nps

Color Count

x 75 (42.86%)
x 83 (47.43%)
x 0 (0%)
x 17 (9.71%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)
x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

4.5s4.2s4.2s4.2s3.9s3.9s3.9s3.6s
35
28
21
14
7

Corrected offset

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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First Delay changed: 0:02 => 0:03

* Folder contains an sm.old file, an ssc file, and an ssc.old file; please remove these.
* Change offset -0.053 -> -0.085; timestamps are given under this change.

- 18.085: It's really hard to tell what this goes to. I'd recommend either removing this to focus on the melody or bringing in some 16ths here.
- 28.885: You reverse PR from here all the way to 38.785, presumably to mix the patterns up a bit. This approach is reasonable since it's consistent, but I'd recommend switching back to normal PR at 38.485 since that marks the beginning of a new section in the song.
- 39.085, 43.085, etc.: You have some pretty long gaps here. It might be more engaging to follow the piano during these, but either approach is fine honestly.
- 48.085, 78.085, 88.585, 94.685 (with following 8th), 110.185: reversed PR
- 42.985: Not the same sound as the preceding 4th.
- 56.785: Double check the PR here.
- 62.785, 67.604, 76.885: PR again.

Cool song. The chart is competently structured, but 32 ms offsync is quite a lot, so CQ on that. I also very highly recommend you look over the whole chart (including the parts I didn't specifically comment on) for PR, because given the slow speed of the song poor PR tends to be very noticeable.