TEM SHOP (Ben Briggs Glitch Hop Remix) :: FFR Batch Submission

gold stinger - TEM SHOP (Ben Briggs Glitch Hop Remix) - Ben Briggs [7.5 / 10]

Sept/Oct 2020

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http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4732809&postcount=223

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Omitted a few notes in the main tem shop rhythm in favor of rhythmic breaks, otherwise the layering would get messier than I'd prefer it to be.

Simfile Folder Name

TEM SHOP (Ben Briggs Glitch Hop Remix) (gold stinger)

Note Count

1170

Chart Length

2:31

Average NPS

7.8983

Estimated Difficulty

61.93

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -6

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 0

Jumps

								x 224
							

Hands

								x 48
							

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 3

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
7 - 21.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
8 - 16.00 nps 1 Second
15 - 15.00 nps 2 Seconds
29 - 14.50 nps 5 Seconds
63 - 12.60 nps 10 Seconds
118 - 11.80 nps 30 Seconds
304 - 10.13 nps 1 Minute
528 - 8.80 nps

Color Count

x 444 (37.95%)

x 240 (20.51%)

x 82 (7.01%)

x 140 (11.97%)

x 102 (8.72%)

x 7 (0.6%)

x 44 (3.76%)

x 90 (7.69%)

x 21 (1.79%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.8s0.57s0.57s0.57s0.57s0.57s0.53s0.53s

Some missing color accounted for

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TEM SHOP (Ben Briggs Glitch Hop Remix)
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- Sync, metadata, permissions good.

- 19.164, 23.527: Shouldn't be same as previous hand. Nice colour usage though.
- 21.391, 26.845, etc.: Why no 48ths here? You have one at 16.982 & 42.118, and have three-note 48th bursts in this section.
- 30.527: Missing note. Done at 23.982.
- 32.345: Missing note. Ignore if this was left out to emphasize the tem shop melody.
- 35.992: Missing note, see 40.345.
- 44.163: Lower than the previous
- 44.300: Missing 48th again
- 46.345: Strange choice making this descending.
- 64.709, 73.436: Missing jump (see the 4th previous)
- 75.890: PR's kinda suss here. Recommend just turning this from [12]43 to [12]34.
- 87.345 section: The hi-hat is followed pretty sporadically here. It's included at 87.799, 88.163, etc. but omitted at 88.890, 93.254, 95.955, etc. Looks like you frequently leave it out before 48th flams, but those aren't the only instances where it's missing, and they seem like strange exceptions to me.
- 89.254: Lower than the previous
- 94.345, .708: Vocals here, should be jumps under your current structure. The first one could be omitted if you think it would be spiky.
- 105.258: Missing note
- 106.299: Should be on the 24th
- 110.708: Looks like a missing note for the melody here, there's a naked subbeat here and everything lol

- Cool file. While the tem shop melody sections got a bit draggy by the end, everything else was nice and the patterning shines in the 24th light JS sections. Most technical errors I found were nitpicky, but the missing 48ths throughout the file were quite noticeable and it's strange to me that they weren't accented (except around 42.118, but that seems to the outlier). Good to go, though it would be great if you could give the 48ths another look. [7.5/10]

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fixes applied based on notes.

- 19.164, 23.527 was left the same. Color usage was to highlight that these were different without making the patterning for the section complicated, but should both be a hand. It uses the same instrument as 00:45.618 for example, but the example is not a hand because it is used differently.

- 48ths were applied, but 00:44.300/00:32.345 were left out, as they are quite muted in comparison to their counterparts. Majority of listed missed 48ths were indeed missed in the way they were intended to be played.

- 89.254 is following PR from the 48th.

- 106.299 is maintaining colorization from previous sections, 110.708 was left out because I realized in post that a jump is gonna have to go afterwards for consistency in layering across sections. So either I eat a note here for a missing note, or I eat a note for not having consistent layering, or I eat a note for an unintended minijack into a hand. There's just no winning with hands.

Everything else should be there.

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Fixes applied based on notes.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1161 => 1170
AVG NPS changed: 7.83753 => 7.89829
Hand Bias changed: -3 => -6

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