TC_Halogen - 8/10
- offset is good
- 1:02.085: can’t help but feel like there should be some separation here, a straight blip just kinda feels wrong to play compared to what’s heard
- 1:44.285/etc: a little sharp as 64ths and terminates a touch too early; it doesn’t quite have as much punch as some of the 48ths to me either, so it could be made a little less significant
- 1:45.618: might be worthwhile to flip the ordering of the L/D here
- definitely pushing the boundaries of semi-dump with this
- that being said, this is fun as fuck lol -- higher level players should appreciate the finesse required to play this properly

Wiosna - 7.5/10
26.485 - this should be straight 32nds given the sound here. i know that the waveform has 48ths but there's still a sound present from 26.485 to 26.585 that i think is more notable than what the waveform implies. this repeats a lot so keep that in mind
39.285 - likewise with this
1:02.235 - could have a 16th minijack here
1:03.085 - i don't think this burst is quite right, seems a bit more broken up than straight 32nds here
1:44.184 - burst is a bit too short here and i don't think 64ths really work given that it's about the same intensity as the bass wobbles corresponding to 48ths. like before this repeats a fair amount, so keep that in mind.
1:45.734 - ghost note
1:56.751 - this note can be removed to keep the bursts more separated, this set of bursts play too continuously as is. this repeats as usual.

Interesting chart, good structure in general, though I have some reservations with a few layering decisions here and there. There aren't many notes here, but given that the chart repeats a lot, any error would be exponential, so these errors are pretty significant overall. That said, I think that the chart is acceptable as is, but I would like to see the main concerns cleaned up because the chart plays a bit oddly in some places.