Dragon Hop 5
Beginning has generally good PR.
23.284 why is this a minijack?
24.284 why is this a 3 to create an anchor here? there is no repeating sound and the piano is pretty consistently playing very different notes each 8th.
^ this repeat
and unfortunately it gets very very distracting
Basically in this whole section you have a ton of jumpchains and 3-4 note anchors that absolutely don't fit with the music at all, at least for my taste
Lead instrument here is the piano which is not playing repeated notes
Percussion is also spaced out and not consecutive 8ths. There is a repeating hi-hat on the 8ths but that is definitely not the thing that should take layering focus here over the piano or the kicks/claps.
29.534 this is particularly bad example of the above, especially because the piano goes up right after
31.034 this is very backwards pr
32.034 beginning here, the layering is super weird. There is no reason every 4th and only 4ths should be jumps when lots of kicks fall on the 8ths, the piano melody is not as straightforward as all 4ths either
-PR on 34.534-36.034 coudl be improved
The next 2 sections basically repeat issues from the 2 sections that are exactly the same
Song is also very...newgrounds midi...and quite hard to listen to, and not very interesting for charting - it's just straight 8ths and it really is kind of boring as a song to sit through, song quality aside (not much you can do there, honestly, as short as it is)