Village Beautification in 5-4 :: FFR Batch Submission

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qrrbrbirbel - Village Beautification in 5-4 - Patrick Burns [7 / 10]

May/June 2020

Rejected

http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4732812&postcount=224 perms

Simfile Folder Name

Village Beautification In 5-4 (qrrbrbirbel)

Note Count

2264

Chart Length

4:28

Average NPS

8.5434

Estimated Difficulty

62.3

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 38

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 1 4 - 20

Jumps

								x 552
							

Hands

x 8

Quads

x 1

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
7 - 21.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
8 - 16.00 nps 1 Second
15 - 15.00 nps 2 Seconds
26 - 13.00 nps 5 Seconds
57 - 11.40 nps 10 Seconds
114 - 11.40 nps 30 Seconds
321 - 10.70 nps 1 Minute
627 - 10.45 nps

Color Count

x 445 (19.66%)

x 760 (33.57%)

x 44 (1.94%)

x 672 (29.68%)

x 4 (0.18%)

x 215 (9.5%)

x 8 (0.35%)

x 88 (3.89%)

x 28 (1.24%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.8s0.8s0.53s0.53s0.53s0.53s0.4s0.27s

- offset is fine
- pitch relevance could use a little bit of work but it’s not the worst thing ever; compared to previous submissions, this is a noticeably better attempt
- i’m a bit thrown off by the earlier color gimmicks and the gimmicks at 2:48ish (same thing)
- the later instance of color gimmicks are a bit more intelligent (starting at 1:28) because it kinda emphasizes that 3/4 time signature a bit better and also keeps things red on each time signature, which is often a problem when you opt into snapping to 16ths for something like this
- 16.887: should be 32nds
- 26.445/29.100/etc: missing jumps for snare?
- 58.569: make this a different jump so that the kick is better separated from the ride cymbal at 58.170
- 1:09.719: missing gentle hi-hat note here; there are others
- 1:26.445: same layering of strings as earlier; triple isn’t necessary
- 1:37.861/etc: this just looks incorrect; the patterning is so much more jarring while accommodating for the boost in layering and there’s not much to justify the occasional repetition
- 1:50.471: missing note
- 1:58.569: again, I understand the boost in structure, it’s just not a good visual representation
- 2:01.223: appears to be a misplaced jump
- 2:10.250: can’t find anything within the music, even at lower rates, that accommodates for these 24ths -- the echoes in the instrumentation don’t quite line up with it either
- 2:21.666 to 2:22.728: start w/ a [LU] and then [LR], alternating for pitch -- it’ll be more accurate to the first of the three jumps that happens before as it’s the same pitch
- 2:35.737: missing jump (it seems like the the bass was a component used for making the jumps), though structurally, it seems like the bass stops being followed as a use of jumps mid-phrase
- 2:56.445: remove jump
- interesting attempt at something; it’s not bad, but the color gimmick structure might be a bit too ambiguous for anyone to determine beyond just random coloring -- structurally, it could be polished a little bit more

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Addressed all notes listed except the color theory. i couldnt think of an alternative color scheme with my limited brain power so i left it as is. hopefully the 'beautification' in the name is enough to convince people the colors be worthy ^_^

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 2263 => 2264
AVG NPS changed: 8.53962 => 8.5434
Hand Bias changed: 27 => 38

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offset seems to have shifted from proper to 15ms off?

file looks a bit better, but i'm struggling to really bring this into acceptance territory as a result of the unexplainable color gimmick earlier on.

this is a situation where definitely seek another judge for the purpose of an appeal as you're within the range and i've been the one to judge the file in both instances.

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We can actually just table the submission for right now, cuz I have to switch laptops just to edit files now lol (amongst other deadlines i need to meet)

I also want to find a good way to express the 5/4 time signature in the mentioned sections so back to the semi-drawing board! ^_^

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Moving to rejected since no other update has been made in the allotted timeframe Will need to be submitted to a new batch.

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