- 3.799/10.115: personally would like this to be a little bit easier of a pattern to contrast against the minitrills
- 9.030: similar situation here, pattern is a bit tight
- 11.497: when you've got really accented kicks represented with minitrills, using something as abrasive as that for a sound this subtle feels quite extreme for accenting purposes
- 15.049: better in patterning, but still creates that minijack which should probably be removed
- 27.681: cute
- 33.799: no accenting of the bass here like you do at 4.786?
- 35.181/etc: tighten up your structure here; you go in and out from following the vocals and it's not entirely clear what the aim is
- 41.497: "all the colors in the rainbow" -- ahahahahaha, got ya; this lyrical sequence starts at 41.201 (which you're missing), so you could probably reorient the patterning to include a white note somewhere without extending the gimmick beyond the lyrics themselves: 42.089 is where the lyrics stop, but before that, you have 9 syllables to use all colors for quantize -- get it right :p
- 46.086/46.480: missing note; check your 32nd note placement here in general, there's a few from here and a touch ahead that aren't quite right or are missing
- 50.576/etc: this pattern redundancy is a nice touch, but your pattern choice could be better - the implicit one-handed trilling is a little too strong here and doesn't feel very nice to play through
- 1:13.668: not quite right in terms of representation here; the separation in that weird background noise increases in speed right here, meaning you should have offbeat 24ths (16th - 48th - 48th - 16th) starting here instead
- 1:26.891: aha
- 1:32.516: missing jump
- 1:48.158: missing note for melody
- 1:54.424: missing note for melody
- 1:58.766: minijack isn't quite correct here
- 2:02.517: ^
- 2:05.082: ^
- not a bad file overall, but needs a little bit more in the ways of polishing to be acceptable, as structure could be cleaned up to make for a better player experience