- offset’s good
- 24.679: noticeably missing percussion note
- 35.119/36.079: missing jumps? You had them earlier and adding them doesn’t detract from the repeating notes that you’re accenting for the melody, so it’s probably alright to put them back.
- 41.179: this burst is still 64ths; if you want to add something to accent it with color, that’s fine -- but adding notes here is definitely ill-advised when you’re already working with only a 30ms gap between notes accenting this like you did in the first iteration
- 45.079: some missing notes here for percussion
- 45.679: I understand not wanting to accent for the next two 64th blips, but why is this one not fully kept?
- 46.039: two repeating jumps here feels a bit incorrect in terms of intensity
- 57.559: ghost note; too far away from the snare to really have an impact in that way either
- 59.479: missing note for kick; you’re accenting these with triples on occasion so I’m pretty sure it’s worth accenting with at least a single note
- 1:02.599: same as 57.559
- 1:07.158: same as 59.479
- 1:34.399: burst starts right away; you’re missing a 64th at 1:34.429
- 1:35.179: missing note
- 1:36.079: ahaha, definitely appreciate the attention to detail here
- 1:45.679: this is a little mean for the end of the song, eek
- chart could use a bit of cleaning up, but I think it’s good enough as is to be queued