Coffee Black :: FFR Batch Submission
qrrbrbirbel - Coffee Black - Feed Me [5.5 / 10]
March/April 2020
Rejected
http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273003&postcount=4 blanket monstercat perms

Simfile Folder Name

Coffee Black (Qrrbrbirbel)

Note Count

1579

Chart Length

2:23

Average NPS

11.2145

Estimated Difficulty

83.46

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x 15

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 55 4 - 68

Jumps

x 289

Hands

x 18

Quads

x 2

Color Jumps

x 7

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
41 - 20.50 nps 5 Seconds
89 - 17.80 nps 10 Seconds
167 - 16.70 nps 30 Seconds
441 - 14.70 nps 1 Minute
825 - 13.75 nps

Color Count

x 463 (29.32%)
x 403 (25.52%)
x 62 (3.93%)
x 404 (25.59%)
x 61 (3.86%)
x 114 (7.22%)
x 50 (3.17%)
x 6 (0.38%)
x 16 (1.01%)

Largest Note Gaps

2.87s0.77s0.6s0.6s0.4s0.4s0.4s0.4s
35
28
21
14
7

hidden hold >:(

Coffee Black (qrrbrbirbel) [5.5/10]

Judge Notes:
> Sync is good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.
> Permission check Good.

-Probably could have cut the intro, as there isn’t really much there that’s rhythmically inclined to the music, nor does the music itself take place in the intro.

-[00:11.658] Missing 8th. (Repeats at 00:18.058)

-[00:15.458] Holy jeez that is really quiet, but checks out.

-[00:24.258] Personal preference, this should be a single.

-[00:25.358] Another personal preference, would have liked the 16th to get carried into here, but would mean also carrying a 16th into the 24th trill at 00:18.758 as well.

-[00:26.258] Not really understanding the layering of dropping this note for a single now given that it’s got an even higher relevance in keeping the beat in the 16th section. Kinda overlooked it in the intro.

-[00:32.258] Would have preferred 4th layering here tbh. The 1-2 gallop is powerful at 00:32.658.

-[00:34.758 & 00:34.958] Dropped 16ths.

-[00:36.158] Making note of 16th here. The patterning out of the [R] and into [24] here is powerful, but unsure if it is enough if fixes start being made to include missing 16ths in this section.

-[00:37.858] Correct 16th usage (comparative to 00:34.758)

-[00:54.358] Confused as to what the 12ths are being layered to here.

-[01:09.858] 4th here is also part of the jack. Would consider mirroring the [12][34] jumptrill after it to maintain a fair transition.

-[01:11.858] Missing jump.

-[01:19.458] Feels particularly messy, despite the separation of 16ths from 24ths for readability sakes. Might have to do with the 16ths after the 8th arrow (including the 8th arrow) carrying more weight on the bass than the 4th and the following 16th. Isolating them from one another may do the trick, but feels rough in general to play.

-[01:20.758] Ghost 16th.

-[01:26.058] Absolutely evil.

-[01:32.658] Could use a jump.

-[01:55.858] Lmao. Definitely not feeling the [R] column anchor here. Section doesn’t play out much differently than what has already been made available earlier in the file.

-Missing a lot of 16ths in the first 2/3rds of the file, and would need a massive amount of cleanup to insert them. The dubstep portion of the song was handled a lot better than the first portion of the song, but needs a fair amount of cleanup as well in distinguishing PR & addressing missing 16ths in break sections.