Out Of Sense (keanny)
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00:16.789 - 00:28.941: there are more chord changes here that would be good to follow to make this section more interesting - listen closely!
-00:20.872: ghost?

00:34.827: (optional) missing piano jump
01:02.929 - 01:03.213: this pattern is a little too spicy for this difficulty level at this speed - suggest mirror of 01:02.359 - 01:02.739
01:03.783: missing piano - suggest 1(234)
01:51.726: why not jump?
01:53.150: (subjective) while this hand is technically correct it feels out of place in comparison with the rest of this end section

Chart is pretty solid overall, with a fairly well thought out structure that compliments the song nicely. Smooth out that one spike and a bit of cleanup and this is good to go.
Congrats on your first accepted chart!

Judge Score: 7.50 - Change Recommended

00:16.789 - 00:28.941: i'd intended this section to be a break section after the (frankly) explosive opening, so i charted the section's piano with BMS-style column-based keysounding because the repetition is supposed to help players recover their stamina.
00:20.872: not a ghost, it goes to the extra cello note. in fact, i realized i missed another note like this on 00:20.112 so i've gone ahead and fixed that
00:34.827: that was a mistake, fixed to bring the section more in line with other similar sections later in the song
01:02.929 - 01:03.213: i've proposed a replacement in your discord DMs, hopefully it alleviates the spike
01:03.783: fixed
01:51.726: my bad, must have missed it. fixed
01:53.150: you're right, plus on second thought i didn't like the 1[12] minijack @ the left hand so replaced it with something else

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1123 => 1125
AVG NPS changed: 10.14453 => 10.1626
Hand Bias changed: -13 => -15

Change recommended, and some fixes were applied, let's move this along to DC consultants.