4 (Omega Link46) [6.5/10]
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- 0:04.032, 0:07.232 A major problem i find in this chart is that the patterning is quite random. Sections like these seem to have jacks randomly, and note and jump placement seems quite arbitrary. 0:13.232 is really where it starts to get egregious. Sometimes we have 3 note jacks, sometimes we have 2. Sometimes we dont jack at all. There is no rhyme or reason to it. 0:24.432 is the first part i find to have actual structure, where we see a motif of 2 note jacks come in.

- 0:38.431 Is the one place where we have an idea that really syncs with the song. While i dont think chaining the jumps is the best solution, this is the one place that really represents the song.

- 0:42.431 This is the part of the chart where things get really inconsistent. You stop layering in jumps, and solely focus on the synth, except when you do layer the jumps. that constant 8th beat is gone despite being charted for the whole song with the synth. The 16th patterning is also quite difficult considering how few 16ths are in the chart. 343 212 in particular is quite brutal. and at 0:52.831 we stop charting the kicks as jumps for some reason.

What this chart really fails to do is really reflect the song. while all the arrows do go to sounds in the song, i feel i could replace the audio with a similar song and the chart would work about as well. Use concepts like Pitch Relevancy and give the pattern some meaning to help it stand out. Using "whatever feels good" for patterning doesn't always work out for the best. Consistency is another big when looking later into the chart. 0:12.832 and 0:52.032 shouldn't be so different when they are so similar. Its a good idea to think of a chart as a set of rules, and as long as you follow those rules you'll have a consistent chart.

Judge Score: 6.50 - Rejected

4 (Omega Link46) [6/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

37.032 & 37.431: There's potential to add these 16ths here on column 4 and repattern a little around them. Not necessary though.

38.032: Move to column 1 for better PR on the following 8 notes.

42.032-43.232: Here doing 342 321 would be better PR than 343 212.

51.232-1:04.032: It's a bit strange to have this part be so easy relative to the rest of the chart. In the first half, the hihats are all layered with the 8ths notes, but here for some reason they aren't.

52.831 & 54.431 & 56.032 & etc: The layering of the jumps becomes inconsistent here; the jumps so far have been on every 4th with the kick and snare. It's understandable to underlayer them to single notes when they're part of a 16ths chain (like at 42.431, 43.232, etc), but that should be done consistently. For example, 51.232 should probably be a single note for that same reasoning.

1:00.431: Missing note.

This is a neat attempt at a pretty ambient chart. The ideas are fine in isolation, but there's a bit of a lack of consistency in how the different sections are charted when looking at the bigger picture. Given that the song is quite simple overall, this chart would have to be pretty solid to not make the concerns so apparent. As is, it falls a bit short unfortunately, although it does have some potential.

Judge Score: 6.00 - Rejected