Cerebellum (The Ghost Of 3.13 remix) :: FFR Batch Submission

Lights - Cerebellum (The Ghost Of 3.13 remix) - Supire & The Ghost of 3.13 [7 / 10]

OT17 Bounty Batch

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Rejected

v9 spreadsheet Spire and The Ghost of 3.13

low 100s bounty.

idk, i did a thing. it goes chk chk chk chk brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr weeeeoooooooomp brrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr and the tappies go fwoo fwoo fwoo. its a file. maybe its a fun one? idk i don't chart this kind of thing very often. it probably sucks.

✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

Simfile Folder Name

Cerebellum (The Ghost Of 3.13 Remix) (Lights)

Note Count

3059

Chart Length

2:48

Average NPS

18.4983

Estimated Difficulty

101.5

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -27

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 96 3 - 139 4 - 255

Jumps

								x 720
							

Hands

								x 39
							

Quads

x 3

Color Jumps

								x 11
							

Color Hands

x 2

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
14 - 28.00 nps 1 Second
25 - 25.00 nps 2 Seconds
46 - 23.00 nps 5 Seconds
107 - 21.40 nps 10 Seconds
210 - 21.00 nps 30 Seconds
589 - 19.63 nps 1 Minute
1165 - 19.42 nps

Color Count

x 939 (30.7%)

x 676 (22.1%)

x 113 (3.69%)

x 853 (27.88%)

x 115 (3.76%)

x 184 (6.02%)

x 57 (1.86%)

x 10 (0.33%)

x 112 (3.66%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.2s0.2s0.2s0.2s0.17s0.17s0.17s0.17s

AHHH WAIT I FORGOT TO CUT THE MP3 TRUS GONNA KILL ME 1SEC

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yo you put tappies this tmie instead of longies!!

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cut the mp3 so tru doesn't hunt me down, beat me up, take my lunch money, and reject my file.

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MP3 Length changed: 4:26 => 2:48
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Lights won't stop gloating about their superior accept rate over other stepauthors and therefore I am in favor of Tru taking Light's lunch money.

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Just flaunting it over you. Nobody else.

Stop editing my comments to make me look bad gold.

help, management is shitposting on my batch entry.

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Approved for low-mid 100s bounty, cleared for judging.

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Cerebellum (The Ghost Of 3.13 remix) (Lights) [7.5/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

54.558: Would highly suggest changing to 34(12) here and on the other similar iterations. It's quite left hand heavy right now with little musical justification.

1:02.613: 32nd here, not 12th.

1:31.724: Would suggest (13)(14)(23)3 here.

1:32.391: No jump.

1:41.558: Jump is maybe unnecessary, just a 2 is fine.

1:55.558: Integrating the slowdown from here would be really cool. Not trivial to add but maybe can be done if you wanna. You'd have to add 1:54.766 too. However it does feel sliiightly odd that you chart the minijack at 1:54.891 because that goes to the sound I'm suggesting to layer.

2:01.474: Just a single here. See 1:58.808 or 2:00.141 for example.

2:06.974: Inconsistent with 2:01.641 (triplet 16ths glut with no jumpjack). Same for 2:06.974.

2:11.391: Given that the left hand has the most going on in a row, moving this to (234) would alleviate.

2:13.141: This and the next 16th should probably just be on (34) too for PR (and move 2:13.391 to (12)).

2:17.724: No jump.

2:28.599: Could afford a 32nd. Same for 2:33.933 and the next iterations.

2:34.808: Move to col 1, not same PR as the previous quad minijack.

2:40.224: This 8th should probably be a hand and the quad before it too, because the loud piano chord hits on the 8th in this iteration so it makes no sense to have it be identical to the other ones. Something like (134)3(124)3(12)...

2:45.391: Following the logic for 2:40.224, this should be a hand.

Note: The cut could use a bit of work although this one isn't a dealbreaker. A smoother and longer fade out would allow toning down the layering gradually and end on simple singles instead of this pretty abrupt quad (hand). The full song seems to allow such a gradual cut over these measures too.

This chart is quite nice and doesn't have major issues. Really fun motifs here and there especially in the first half. Layering and consistency on the jumps gets a little bit muddy at times and some patterning could really use slight changes to greatly increase the flow.

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Cerebellum (The Ghost Of 3.13 Remix) (Lights) [6.5/10]

- Perms are good

- *Sync is mostly good. Offset should be -0.052 (It is -0.058 upon submission)

- **Metadata is bad. No artist is filled in the metadata. Add the original artist to the metadata.

2.058 & 7.391 - Not a minijack

*3.931 & 4.391 Bursts - Same patterns although the 2nd one is a lot more muddy than the first one, shouldn't be the same representation technically

5.141 - Not a minijack

10.641 - Subjective - PR, should be 4

**12.724-12.946 - This part is too vague to make sense with the song. The samples are rather tame there which makes it musically unjustified. Should be simple 8ths instead. This happens several times throughout the file, double check these

**18.058-18.280 - ^

*20.588 - Mistimed? Compare 15.058

22.558 - Subtle, should be a single

23.391 - See 2.058 & 7.391

**23.558-23.724 - Not 48ths. These are 32nd if you only look at the pan left side. The right side is just pan left but delayed to the right. It also creates an unreasonable transition to the jack.

24.724 - See 3.931 & 4.391

^ So for any notes that that you see "See <timestamp note>", you can generally guess that it's consistent throughout the file's approach. Further notes similar to these will be minimal, but still relevant.

31.183 - Too subtle to make sense on normal rate

39.391-39.613 - See 12.724-12.946

*41.641-41.724 - Careful with these type of gluts. They are generally very janky to execute because of alternating fingers between one hand to another

41.891-41.988 - Huh? You didn't step this before. Compare note 20.588 and then 15.058

43.224 - Not a minijack

43.558-43.946 - The 16th is too subtle to hear on normal rate. Also see 12.724-12.946

44.308 - Subjective, but that minijack is a bit rude probably

44.724-45.224 - Spicy

46.058-47.058 - Even more spicy jfc

47.974 - See 44.308

51.724-51.974 - Questionably trippy, you didn't do this a section prior

*52.551 - Ehhhhhhhhhhhh. Honestly, I find this to be pushy due to the huge burst fest prior to this, would suggest to change that to only a single note

53.391-53.946 - These ones make a little bit more sense since the wubs are also present. Could probably leave those as is

*1:07.391 - Bit of an awkward transition from this jack to the rolly 32nds. Change the longer ones to col 4 maybe?

1:26.724-1:26.974 - You could do mini jumpjacks here tbh

1:32.391 - PR, minijack should be on column 1

*1:33.058-1:33.391 - This is kinda weird PR wise, I would suggest to do something like this instead https://i.imgur.com/NUawBBI.png

1:36.391-1:36.724 - Inconsistent? Compare 1:28.391-1:28.724 / 1:33.391-1:34.058

**1:42.724-1:43.058 - Inconsistent. Compare segments prior to this

*1:48.891-1:50.224 - Why is this constantly ascending rolly patterns?

1:52.224, 1:52.724, 1:53.558, 1:55.224, 1:55.891, 1:56.224 - Missing jump
^ First segment (1:46.724-1:52.058) is either inconsistent with the jumps motif, or it's the segments after that

*1:54.974 - Why is this a minijack? Unjustified

1:59.224 - Missing 24th bursts

2:28.558, 2:33.891, etc - Flam?

2:40.058 - Slighly less strong as the kicks in the prior sections, could argue this is a hand instead

Ending - Cut could be improved a bit, it kinda ends very sudden.

You know what? I can actually fuck with this. The approach feels pretty clever and mesmerizing with the song. I don't really like the jacks since they're a bit more pushing it for this difficulty, but they're not enough problematic imo.

That said, there is blurriness with some of the patterns representing the song that aren't justifying it, and a few more inconsistencies with the structure. If you allow yourself to clean/polish this up a little bit more, this could be a great fit for FFR.

In an event this file goes above the rejected rating, FR for **, and CR for *.

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I long for the sweet loving embrace of death. every moment i spend looking at this file is but an eternity of agony.

jk i fixed a lot of stuff. still not done yet tho no touchy.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Artist changed: Supire => Supire & The Ghost of 3.13
Offset changed: -0.058 => -0.052
MP3 Length changed: 2:48 => 2:46
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Note Count changed: 3096 => 3049
AVG NPS changed: 18.72203 => 18.43781
Hand Bias changed: -40 => -23

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I'm willing to consider this good to go? I've addressed most of the notes to the best of my ability and went through and tried to fix some of the more glaring consistency issues with other parts of the file based on those notes. The cut should also be improved (thx eppu, u a real 1)

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Note Count changed: 3049 => 3061
AVG NPS changed: 18.43781 => 18.51038
Hand Bias changed: -23 => -25

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Overall looking good. One more note before releasing this off of Fixes Required.

**53.385-53.927 - Only instance where the 20ths remain (all the other segments don't do this - despite my note saying this could be left as is, it's no longer relevant here)

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eat a butt deam. addressed your FR and the other 2 notes you DM'd me.

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Note Count changed: 3061 => 3059
AVG NPS changed: 18.51038 => 18.49829
Hand Bias changed: -25 => -27

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FR notes have been addressed. Good to go.

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Update regarding this submission:

As it turns out, we actually don't have permission for this song at this time. See source here: https://nhspire.bandcamp.com/track/cerebellum-the-ghost-of-313-remix

In accordance to Supire permissions, for anything on labels or albums that are not owned by Spire / Supire, you must contact the musician first before using.

This submission has two weeks to address the permission issue mentioned. If by that time it cannot be resolved, we will unfortunately have to reject the file until the permission for this song is cleared.

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Moved to Rejected

When the permission issue for this submission resolves, this can go back to Accepted.

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I haven't heard a word from 3.13, so I'm going to go out on a limb and say its probably not happening.

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