Cub Cub Lion Heart (jacobvl39) [6.5/10]

- Perms (Limited), metadata, sync are good

5.237-7.123 - From an accuracy standpoint, it doesn't seem like there are trill in this section

8.151 - PR, should be 4

11.580 or 11.751, 11.923 - Different sounds going into the same column which PR wise does not feel correct

15.694-18.437 - No 16ths here / undercharted, which is inconsistent with 5.237-7.123

31.294, 1:59.061 - Jump?

45.609 - Ghost note?

48.608 - Why not [24]?

54.266 - Why not 3?

58.209 - Jump

1:10.715 - PR for flute, should be 3

1:11.315, 1:22.287 - Hmm, not technically a mini jumpjack as far as I see it. Something else that makes more sense is [13][23][24]. Subjective though

1:20.836-1:21.265 - Weird that the notes here are still descending despite the song changing to ascending notes, suggest to mirror

1:22.544 - Could probably afford a flam as well?

1:22.715-1:25.458 - Questionable set of repeating 8ths on column 1, does not feel like it accents nor flowing with the song right

1:35.144, 1:40.633, etc - Missing note?

1:35.726 - Slighly off, it's a late 64th when modifying from that timestamp

1:36.346 - Massively offsync. Sounds more like 1:36.420 instead. Luckily you don't need to change color theory here

1:37.755 - Also offsync. Should be 1:37.755 (8th)

1:41.404 - It makes more sense to keep this hand the same as the previous one ([123]) so it could PR right with the 8th before

1:43.633 - Move to 4, change hand above accordingly as well

2:13.376 - Ghost note

2:17.061-2:21.690 - Oh boy, that's quite a ramp up in difficulty of patterns

2:38.318 - Move to [24]

2:42.257 - There's a very strong emphasis on the synth here, so maybe add that as a jump

2:43.714 - Missing note

2:49.281-2:58.712 - What's the motif of the hands here? Are you charting them for the kicks, the slightly more accented low bass synth, or both? If both, this is a bit confusing and unintuitive

3:00.255 - This is awkward and the only place where you do this kind of it. If you want to keep the hand, at least nix the jump on the 16th prior

3:00.598-3:05.055 - This one is also a bit difficult to understand what some of the 8th jumps go to. Particularly, 3:03.170 and 3:03.512

3:12.599 - Bit of an odd choice to end the file with a burst choice like that, but I don't hate it either

This chart is in a bit of an odd place. Playability wise it's good and the ideas make sense. But there are still a few technical issues that makes this file's flow fall steeply. Particularly, there are a few (presumable) accidental jump chains that do not provide any justification to the song, e.g. 54.095-54.438 & 1:10.543-1:10.886. As well as single notes landing on the same column as jumps e.g. 48.780 that lose a bit of sense of accuracy/PR. Some stuff like 1:10.029-1:10.543 does make sense however, so not everything is like that.

Besides that, there are lots of minor/unclear mistakes that are spread out to the entire file which leaves me uncertain whether this is acceptable enough to pass or not. I haven't looked at the initial submission for comparison, but what I want to reassure you is that the file not bad, and I think it can fit in the game no problem. Just still needs a bit more polish before it can go.