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Los Angeles (Tim Ismag Remix) :: FFR Batch Submission
basicdrummerman -
Los Angeles (Tim Ismag Remix) -
Quartus Saul & Tim Ismag [6.5 / 10]
Winter 2023 Seasonal Batch
PublicEvents
Rejected
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4792274&postcount=479
collab between basicdrummerman and lights
- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Los Angeles (Tim Ismag Remix) (basicdrummerman&Lights)" vs "Los Angeles (Tim Ismag Remix) (basicdrummerman)"
- This file is a collaboration between multiple authors / stepauthors.
Simfile Folder Name
Los Angeles (Tim Ismag Remix) (basicdrummerman&Lights)Note Count
3160Chart Length
3:57Average NPS
13.4583Estimated Difficulty
101
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -16
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 438 4 - 403Jumps
x 584
Hands
x 28
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 6
Color Hands
x 4
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second11 - 33.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
15 - 30.00 nps 1 Second
25 - 25.00 nps 2 Seconds
46 - 23.00 nps 5 Seconds
106 - 21.20 nps 10 Seconds
199 - 19.90 nps 30 Seconds
573 - 19.10 nps 1 Minute
1114 - 18.57 nps
Color Count
x 828 (26.2%)
x 525 (16.61%)
x 137 (4.34%)
x 818 (25.89%)
x 131 (4.15%)
x 353 (11.17%)
x 122 (3.86%)
x 232 (7.34%)
x 14 (0.44%)
Posted at 9:48am on April 3rd, 2024
Los Angeles (Tim Ismag Remix) (basicdrummerman&Lights) [6/10]
PERMS OK
SYNC OK
54.216-55.073: This vocal abstraction makes for pretty bad contrast with the drop. Just keep it single notes to the vocals. Same applies to 2:33.644.
59.680: Noticeably incorrect PR here.
1:08.787: Just picking this random example. Here this specific 32nds roll abstraction goes to the bass-y wub, but just preceding it are Also 32nds rolly abstractions going to the high pitched wubs. There's a fair bit of that in the chart and it makes some parts feel a bit too homogeneous.
1:09.537: 16th here, so no 24ths abstraction. Same for 1:54.109.
1:11.358: Odd to have a long 4321 type roll, doesn't follow PR.
1:13.180: 16th here, this iteration differs from others. Applies to 1:57.751 too.
1:38.466: 16th here.
1:40.930: Here this 4th isn't the same PR as the rest of the jack.
This desperately needs a cut; nothing new is brought in the second half which makes it feel like a copy paste essentially. There's plenty of distinct sections in the first half to make it a decent 2:15 (approx) chart without making it musically weird. Aside from the errors, the general abstraction approach is a bit overdone; a Lot of distinct sounds play like the same rolly patterns despite the wubs offering a good amount of variety. As is, the mix of the abstractions concern plus the repetitive second half is too much for an FR unfortunately. Definitely has good potential for a resub after fixes though.
Posted at 9:54am on April 3rd, 2024
Los Angeles (Tim Ismag Remix) (basicdrummerman & Lights) [7/10] [Fixes Required]
- Perms, metadata, sync are good
Intro-0.537 - Arguably not audible enough
9.664 - Consistency, should be 3? Compare 8.358
11.787 - Consistency, should be a different column
54.216-54.966 - Very vague dump approach. It's also not synced correctly with "ready"
**59.144-59.358 & 59.573-59.787 - Those bursts are quite difficult to execute because of the 3 note anchors, suggest changing this
**1:11.358-1:12.216 - Copy pasted from 57.644-58.501 even though the wubs are different between these segments. Give it a different representation
**1:13.073-1:13.930 - ^
^ **As a whole the 2nd section is copy pasted, at least do the decency of shifting placements / revise sections that sound slightly different from the first section. Change other iterations of this as well accordingly
1:43.716-1:43.930, etc - See 59.144-59.358
2:06.216-2:06.644 - Oof
2:31.501 - Jump? While I get you couldn't do a hand at the previous 4th because of the streams, consistency wise should be a jump
3:01.501 - Ghost note. Additionally the next 8th note is off-sync
3:53.787 - See 2:31.501
This file kinda reminds me of Vantablack in nature. I can fuck with it, however the main meat of the file is not super pleasant (very awkward to play), inaccurately copy-pasted throughout (as described in notes) and as a result needs a cleanup. It's spread out to the entire file, so this needs revision through all of them. If you allow yourself to smooth this up a bit, it can be good to go. FR on ** notes