Charge-Parity Violations :: FFR Batch Submission
xXOpkillerXx -
Charge-Parity Violations -
Kou! & TBN [8 / 10]
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Simfile Folder Name
Charge-Parity Violations (xXOpkillerXx)
Note Count
4915
Chart Length
6:01
Average NPS
13.7495
Estimated Difficulty
102.79
First Note
0:04
Ending Note Delay
0:01
Hand Bias
Framers
0 - 0
1 - 8
2 - 119
3 - 242
4 - 1172
Jumps
Hands
Quads
Color Jumps
Color Hands
Color Quads
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second
12 - 36.00 nps
0.5 Seconds
17 - 34.00 nps
1 Second
32 - 32.00 nps
2 Seconds
57 - 28.50 nps
5 Seconds
115 - 23.00 nps
10 Seconds
215 - 21.50 nps
30 Seconds
592 - 19.73 nps
1 Minute
1062 - 17.70 nps
Color Count
Largest Note Gaps
0.77s0.73s0.67s0.53s0.53s0.53s0.53s0.53s
Posted at 2:44pm on August 27th, 2023
A new chart file was uploaded.
Posted at 2:25pm on February 9th, 2024
Fixes RequiredAccepted*0:55.156-0:55:925 - Nice stream dump touches to spice up the already long and dull intro, but this one in particular is weird, every other representation is rolly while this one isn't, why?Fixed1:06.695-1:13.874 - This has the longest jack/anchor sections in all of the file. It generally plays fine to me, but I have slight concern this would be a bit irritating to do. The 32nd is OHT and I think it could be trippy. Also, there's a sound at 1:09.195 & its other iterations
1:38.747 - This 3 note jack is kind of a yikes, but I could hit it. But it's also the only one that happens in the file, so I'm not sure if this is warranted enough to keep or not
1:46.439-1:47.080 - Weird anchor happening here, suggesting breaking it with 1:46.695
2:25.093 - Vocal sound here
2:49.516-2:50.542 - Really iffy about this. Plays not so great to me
*3:09.774-3:11.312 - Why is there an exceedingly long anchor on the right? Compare with 2:43.106-2:45.927. I would honestly do something like this instead https://i.imgur.com/h7VJQEZ.pngFixed3:16.953 - Move to 1 to distinct from the next notes on 2
3:36.440 - Different PR than 3:35.415
**3:48.748-4:02.594 - Not really understanding the intention of the trilly streams here. The 32nd stream dumps here don't make sense and don't match up with how you did them in the first half, which has significantly better representation to the synth.Sligtly adjusted, but not satisfactory enough. However, this gets released out of FR since it's relatively shorter than the 1st half, and not a huge hinderance to the file.4:21.569-4:33.876 - Meeeeeeeeeeh. I get that this is additive to even out the difficulty and add some more variety into the file, but it annoys me how technically not correct this is. I imagined this would be some dense CJ instead.
4:42.081-4:50.287 - ^
5:53.871-5:55.602 - Ugh. Annoying
Quite a dreamy song. This is looking pretty balanced overall with nice additive dump touches to balance out the difficulty. I feel like nitpickying on this would be too much, since the file plays generally well and there weren't any noticable errors in the smaller details.
I recommend looking over again for some representation bits to the vocal. There seems to be a good portion of it missing which is covered in some of the notes, but there's probably more. FR on ** and CR on *
Posted at 3:51pm on February 9th, 2024
@Deam
*0:55.156-0:55:925 - It's for the synth; it does wobbles there not straight long notes. Keeping this.
1:06.695-1:13.874 - I personally enjoy this pattern as it's unusual while being representative of the song and keeping things not boring in terms of difficulty. Added 1:09.195 (and other iterations) though, good catch.
1:38.747 - Changed to 223.
1:46.439-1:47.080 - Fixed.
2:25.093 - Added with some other missing ones.
2:49.516-2:50.542 - Keeping this, plays fine to me.
*3:09.774-3:11.312 - Did what you suggested but I overcharted 3:10.030 as a (14) to keep the jack aspect of the section going to the drums.
3:16.953 - Done.
3:36.440 - Fixed.
**3:48.748-4:02.594 - The intention here is to incorporate the abstract 32nds of the intro with the jack motif of the part at 1:06.695 together. I admit that it's not the most intuitive although I wouldn't want a straight repeat of the intro pattern because the vocals are super prominent here. I'm open to patterning suggestions though if the 3nds can be made more accurate for that motif I'm going for.
4:21.569-4:33.876 - Fair opinion. While there are indeed a couple of ghost notes in there, this section has quite a lot of blurry true 16ths in it and going full accuracy on charting them would make for a really broken flow that wouldn't be as representative.
5:53.871-5:55.602 - :)
I'm gonna wait for the second judge before I post the updated chart.
Thanks!
Posted at 9:37am on February 10th, 2024
So you're trying to represent the vocals here more? I couldn't really catch them during this segment and figured it still continues to the synth. I don't think it works because the synth still holds more power there imo, and instead you could possibly repattern the representation of the synths with jacky anchors (but for each PR a different jack column)
Posted at 12:05pm on February 10th, 2024
I'll give it another legit think through. If I don't end up with something that I'm satisfied with, lets please just agree to disagree on that section; I think it's "ok" as is and while it might not be great, I don't think it's bad enough (objectively) to not be accepted. If you have specific suggestions (like the image you had for one of the notes) I'll be happy to take a look.
Posted at 12:46pm on February 17th, 2024
Addressed Deam's notes as explained in the previous post.
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 4886 => 4913
AVG NPS changed: 13.66841 => 13.74394
Hand Bias changed: 74 => 59
Posted at 1:43pm on February 17th, 2024
I'm taking the 2nd judge slot for this submission in a rare situation where the judges that would normally be within comfort zone to judge this, are absent/unavailable for multiple reasons and will not be available for a certain amount of time that would make this song susceptible to being stuck in the batch system.
Charge-Parity Violations - Kou! (xXOpkillerXx) [Fixes Required]
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00:24.258 - Between PR of this single 32nd down, the following 8th at 00:25.155, and the following 4th in left at 00:25.668, it comes across as a little murky. PR could be handled a little bit better here by column management in shifting the 8th to the left-most column and then starting fresh with PR again in down column for the 4th.
00:42.079 - You do the exact PR that I called out lol. Do this in this section, for the timestamp at 00:24.258.
00:53.810 - I actually enjoyed the patterning choice at 00:51.310, but don't understand why it wasn't applied here when the timestamps are obviously there for that reason from the looks of it.
*00:55.413 - Deamerai's call-out is fair here, this kinda spices up mid-measure, where something like 00:56.438 is expected for measure changes and stream direction changes and slow trills have been the norm elsewhere. Synth wobble is more akin to what you've been doing elsewhere in this section at 00:51.310 which is much better representation, this sticks out sorely given it is not present with other synth wobbles. Highly recommend changing to pre-existing patterning elsewhere within this stream.
00:59.515 - Again, love this, wish it was applied to similar-sounding sections like 00:57.656 and 01:02.015.
01:06.695 - Maaan, these anchorjacks are really a design choice. Last time I said yes to something like this, it caused the unranked flag to be created for songs. They're passable for what the difficulty ceiling is for the file, but are pretty yikes.
01:38.747 - Big yikes. At 234bpm, you are creating an unfixable 1-framer at this speed. I know they aren't necessarily disciplinary anymore, but given they aren't regularly seen until 105+ it should be taken with a grain of salt, especially if it's the only one of its kind in the file.
01:45.460 - lmao this is a goldstinger pattern if I've ever seen one.
01:47.400 - Not exactly hearing what this 32nd is falling to?
01:50.029 - This anchoring on right hand is an absolute pain to play out of the polyrhythm. Consider swapping it up so that you're not going from minijack into 16th minianchoring on the same hand.
02:11.759 - Missing 16th.
02:47.850 - Missing 8th.
03:38.107 - Missing 16th. (See: 03:39.133) Some other subtle missing notes throughout this section as well, but are all not structured and are inaudible on 100% so you good, just this one.
04:00.928 - This is just the nicety person in me but please move this to down column?
05:21.566 - This is a lot in up column for 5 and a half minutes into the file. Any possibility of breaking this up into normal stream?
05:23.425 - Missing 16th here, and then following note v
05:23.874 - 16ths all the way, between this [12] jump and the following [24] jump on 05:24.130.
*05:37.560 - What is the significance of needing to start a minijack here? This is literally dead air for dumping, there isn't any meaningful minijack interpolation that's being followed here that is present throughout the rest of this jack file. Move the hand to [123], or move the 192nd so that it's not minijacked with the hand, or some similar variation.
*Man, that ending is insufferable. You could've done a regular ol' 'stop stepping' at 05:44.727, a fade-out cut or anything stopping the song on this note and it would've been very nice, but then you done pulled a kono spoon right at the end at 05:53.871 along with a very rude color trill. File would perform much better without that nonsense at the end of a 6 minute file so I am heavily suggesting a cut here under FR.
Solid hit I can get behind some of the jack layering choices of the file, the ending was a giant miss for me. Fixes Required on the ending because it quite honestly will be a deal-breaker for most people looking at attempting a good score on a 6 minute file, and please heavily consider the note for timestamp 00:55.413. Not the end of the world if 55s is not changed but the ending stuff is.
Posted at 3:04pm on February 17th, 2024
@ GS
00:24.258 - Done.
00:42.079 - ^
00:53.810 - I find those with the slow trills more relevant and intense whereas 00:53.810 isn't as prominent. Keeping as is.
00:55.413 - Changed to 13214234 to alleviate the middle but keep the faster wobbles representation.
00:59.515 - See 00:53.810.
01:06.695 - Like you said, the overall difficulty justifies them well and it's rare that a song does that, so I'm keeping it.
01:38.747 - Changed to 223.
01:45.460 - There's nothing exactly there, you mean the 14 41 flams?
01:47.400 - Removed. Usually at this timestamp there's vocals but here they're quite buried.
01:50.029 - Fixed, should hopefully flow better now.
02:11.759 - Added with some more missing.
02:47.850 - Added and fixed PR.
03:38.107 - I think it's just too random to have this single one when the rest is near inaudible and not layered. I get what you mean though.
04:00.928 - Done hahaha.
05:21.566 - Changed it up, should flow better.
05:23.425 - Nope, but did add 5:23.938; I'm layering the drums here, not the background melody synth.
05:23.874 - ^
05:37.560 - Changed to (123).
ending - Keeping it as is; I think it's rather subjective given that it's not a spike relative to what the chart offers and this chart was made with the full song in mind so cutting that non-trivial ending just because it's a bit unconventional isn't what I'd prefer.
Thanks for the notes! It looks much more polished now I think :)
Posted at 3:06pm on February 17th, 2024
Fixes from GS's notes. Please wait for Tru to chime in for the ending as only one judge finds it FR grounds.
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 4913 => 4915
AVG NPS changed: 13.74394 => 13.74953
Hand Bias changed: 59 => 51
Posted at 10:05am on February 18th, 2024
Updated artist as per Tru's request
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Artist changed: Kou! => Kou! & TBN
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Posted at 11:36am on February 18th, 2024
Tiny change after Deam's latest check
A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Hand Bias changed: 51 => 49
Posted at 11:37am on February 18th, 2024
Trill's fine. Silly, but fine.
Sounds like this has been looked at again already so we'll skip ahead to Accept status
Posted at 11:37am on February 18th, 2024
Discussion in DMs resolved my Fixes Required flag. This is good to go.