War in the MirrorWorld :: FFR Batch Submission

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WirryWoo - War in the MirrorWorld - Aoi [7 / 10]

16th Official Tournament (see thread)

PublicEvents

Released

https://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&num=389&event=133

BMS Open Source Perms

Simfile Folder Name

War in the Mirrorworld (WirryWoo)

Note Count

1275

Chart Length

1:56

Average NPS

11.3501

Estimated Difficulty

77.22

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -15

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 17 3 - 25 4 - 6

Jumps

								x 278
							

Hands

								x 16
							

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
12 - 24.00 nps 1 Second
24 - 24.00 nps 2 Seconds
42 - 21.00 nps 5 Seconds
83 - 16.60 nps 10 Seconds
148 - 14.80 nps 30 Seconds
429 - 14.30 nps 1 Minute
723 - 12.05 nps

Color Count

x 556 (43.61%)

x 347 (27.22%)

x 2 (0.16%)

x 315 (24.71%)

x 2 (0.16%)

x 39 (3.06%)

x 2 (0.16%)

x 12 (0.94%)

x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s0.37s

War in the MirrorWorld
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.

- 4.456: Piano grace note is on the 48th after the beat (4.544). See also 10.070 etc.
- 11.181: Same pitch as next jump.
- 11.707: Suggest switching off of column 1 to avoid unjustified anchor.
- 34.251: Feels pretty significant to omit.
- 34.690: Suggest swapping column of this and the next note to ease transition from jack--this is one of only two 3-note jacks in the file.
- 35.479, 36.883, 38.286, etc.: Not sure why these are jacks--they feel a lot more tenuous than all the other minis in this section.
- 45.041: This is pretty aggressive, especially given the minijack just before this not giving much breathing room.
- 56.971: Suggest moving this 16th gallop to columns 2 & 3 and readjusting PR afterwards, the OHT and anchor here don't fit the sound.
- 60.216, 60.392: Lower pitch than 60.041.
- 66.795: Suggest different column. If you need to force a minijack here, do it with the previous jump and not the OHT pattern afterwards.
- 68.199: Sound varies more than a straight OHT would suggest.
** 70.304-73.813: About half of these 24ths are actually 16ths and the other half are 32nds. None are 24ths. Also missing one at 75.216.
- 81.181: Missing high note.
- 90.918: Why minijack?
- 101.708: Fairly abrasive especially given the 8th anchor pattern leading into this, perhaps [13][23] and rearrange the stuff after.
- 111.532: Watch column 1 anchor.

- Plays alright, though there are several times where strict adherence to one form of PR winds up forcing patterns (often anchored) that don't match the sound. Transitions surrounding the two 3-note jacks could be eased up a bit too. FR on 70.304 note--the misrhythms there are pretty blatant and they are confusing as a player. [7.5/10 FR]

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War in the Mirrorworld (WirryWoo) [6.5/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync looks good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.

I'm largely not a fan of the minijack usage in this song. I feel the actual sounds being represented can be quite soft and hard to hear. Additionally it just feels inconsistent when they are actually used. For example 0:13.286 receives minijacks then as the chart is building up at 0:18.549 the 16ths are completely dropped despite the sound still being there. Not to mention that notes are often missing, like at 0:30.391. The minijack anchors dont help as they dont quite match up to the song and feel out of place.

In general this chart just needs another pass or two. There are numerous missing notes throughout the file that i simply do not have the time to list.

I also feel that while the notes certainly do go to the music, something just isn't clicking WITH the music for me. A good example is 0:53.461 All the notes have a corresponding sound in the music, but if you listen to the main synth, each sound has a note in the chart, but the chart doesn't feel like its following the synth, despite me believing that is the intention.

I want to like this chart, but it really just needs a bit more work.

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Thank you for the reviews. They were both very helpful.

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1264 => 1275
AVG NPS changed: 11.25223 => 11.35015
Hand Bias changed: -16 => -15

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Good to go.

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