Kuusou Mesorogiwi (Lights) [7.5/10] -FR-

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

FR note: The ending is very abrupt for FFR standards. A fade out or some kind of cut/edit would probably be necessary here.

10.298 & 14.472: On these it could be nice to anchor the 16th and 8th jumps on one column to emphasize the double kicks.

9.125: Assuming these 16th jumps go to the melody (or the guitar, doesn't matter), here's a slight PR/consistency concern. 9.125 vs 9.385 are different notes/pitch, but the jumps are the same so that the 8th doesnt cause a minijack (which is fine as a motif), however 11.211 vs 11.472 are charted differently and cause a minijack. Since there's a melody note at places like 11.603, it'd be more natural to keep the earlier motif and put the minijack on this 4th as a jump. So for example, from 11.211: (14)3(12)(24)(34)(12)(34). Big text to describe a motif concern, but it's pretty minor don't worry.

16.820-24.125: The vocals here are pretty short, especially relative to the section at 52.298, yet both sections have "long" 32nds. Would suggest limiting some 32nds in this section to triplets (like removing 17.016, 17.277, 17.538 and 17.798 and adjusting the resulting patterns).

18.190: Ghost note, see 22.364 which doesn't have it.

18.777: Should be a 24th, it's pretty clear to be normalized to 16th. (probably avoid the minijack with (34)(12) for example if fixing). See 1:27.646 also which already doesn't have a minijack.

34.885 & 35.016 & 36.972 & 37.103: These are really short vocals and those 32nds should probably be removed. It would make more sense with 38.994 not having them.

40.820-42.646: Check this iteration for consistency with the previous ones, it doesn't seem to match the abstractions.

49.038 & 50.081: Singles.

1:41.081-1:41.342: Could use either a 24ths jumptrill or a 16th to represent the drums here. Same at 1:12.907 actually.

The song repeats for the second half pretty much so check these points there too.

Overall a pretty tasteful approach to vocal abstractions. Nothing is overly done and the balance and flow are great. There are a couple of motif and consistency concerns to check to make things a bit more intuitive, but nothing major and some partly subjective.

Kuusou Mosorogiwi (Lights) [7.5/10]
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No cut >:(

Don’t really have much to offer in terms of feedback.
My main (very subjective) note was to make notes like 20.211 a minijack because the drum is so noticeable there, but it kind of clashes with the vocal focus of the rest of the chart.

This chart has good flow, a fairly well-defined structure and it’s pretty well polished to boot. Ticks all the important boxes for an effective vocal-focused dump chart.

Just cut it pls lol

Looks good to me!