Eternal Drain (DarkZtar) - 6.5/10
Most of the chart is approachable and I didn't have any notable critiques about it (I'd give this a 7.5 to 8 for most of it) -- I felt that some of the 32nd streams started a bit earlier than I expected, but that's mostly because of how you charted the harp sounds, which tended to be more aggressively layered than Wh1teh's version. The patterns are fluent and the jump layering makes sense overall, and I thought that the midsection of the section was well-executed overall.

The main issue I had is the vocal section. While I definitely get that you're making the vocal section more interesting overall, I feel that it's a bit sloppily executed and is hard to follow in general. I think one of the main issues is that I can't easily tell why exactly you have longer bursts for some of the held syllables and minijacks for some others. How I would process vocal dumps like this is that (or at least, how I would chart it) is that I would have a 32nd triplet or minijack for syllables before the end of each phrase, and the syllable at the end of each phrase is a longer burst, usually 24th or 32nd like what you have. You seem to be very very freeform with what you're doing exactly, with certain consecutive syllables like 34.883 to 35.789 being connected into a giant 24th stream et al, and several other consecutive syllables being separated or layered as 16th minijacks in particular.

The vocal section as a whole is just really difficult to judge as a result, since I'm not able to keep track of what you're doing at all, and even while playing it, it felt confusing experience for me to play through as well because I keep thinking that the structure of it would be a bit more concrete. I think a lot of this boils down to idiosyncratic differences in how we make dumps in particular, but it doesn't change the fact that the vocal section dampens a lot of the chart for me as a whole. I don't think I can make concrete notes for any of this since we likely have different conceptions of how to make vocal dump charts like this, so you can keep the section as is, but you'll have to get player feedback to see if they get what you're trying to do here.

Regardless, the chart is a notable improvement from any other Eternal Drain chart of this difficulty I've seen, and it's certainly a more inspired chart for it than ones I've seen from before -- so there's no reason to push this chart down into a reject. I just hope that, again, players enjoy this chart more than I personally would.