Dysnomia (DarkZtar) - 8/10
- 12.548 - 28th burst (?) here can be a bit gentler overall, there's a notable middle column bias that can be a bit much for grinding
- 17.394 - burst here can be broken up a bit, the buzz sounds a bit fragmented here
- 18.317 - minor point, but this jump should be different from 18.087 since the percussion is different
- 19.240 - minor, but this should be a [24] jump or [13] jump similar to 18.779 to 18.894
- 20.163 - burst can be a bit slower (24ths)?
- 20.856 - burst here seems a bit harsh overall due to the pattern before it and exactly like 13.xxx, would suggest changing it to something more rolly, though you might need to manuever the 16ths after while doing so
- 23.279/23.510 - would place 8ths here, the higher synth is more prominent than the hi-hats
- 27.144/27.260 - would suggest moving this to column 3, right middle finger bias here seems a bit unnecessary
- 31.010 - burst is a little bit mean (though I can play it okay) and I'd personally remove the note at 31.202 and balance the burst out to make it a little more ergonomic to play through, since the synth here is a bit soft and feels a bit broken up, but it's up to you
* 35.279/35.510/etc. - these sets of 32nd bursts (alongside 42.663/42.894) are probably going to kill most players' runs on this chart because of the 24th -> 28th burst before it. I like how you did the bursts in 2:48.202/2:48.433 more because it's less straining overall (the 2h minitrill is a comfortable transition out of the 28th burst), so I'd rather you pattern the 32nd bursts like that rather than what you currently have, but I'm not sure how possible that would be, especially since the 28th burst at 42.663 has a jump.
- 35.971 - would suggest changing this to column 1 to avoid column 2 bias that already exists from the 32nds, the 24th gallop would be 21
- 36.837/36.894 - can technically be doubles if you really want
- 38.587 - would suggest omitting this note and to move 38.625 to column 1; the note makes sense, but like 17.394, I think this long burst can be broken up because the sound here is a bit fragmented
- 42.663/42.894 - brutal set of bursts tbh. I don't have any suggestions for this, but I feel as if changing the first 32nd burst to 4231[24] and the other burst to 32413 might make it slightly more forgiving, but you'd have to change the 24th burst after too and that's a bit of a hassle.
- 55.587 - you can be cute and have a [12] jump here instead to emphasise the consecutive bass kicks
- 1:02.625 to 1:02.856 - not sure if I would have 16ths here
- 1:16.933 - lmao this burst. please change this to something a bit more lenient, this is the hardest 28th burst in this section by some distance because of the hidden one hand trills in this burst.
- 1:35.394 - would prefer a burst that's a bit more OH trilly than jumptrilly, but this is ultimately fine
- 1:57.837 - missing 16th, also not sure about this anchor in general since the synth is already fading out
- 2:20.163/2:34.933 - I personally wouldn't want to have jumptrilly bursts here when this section is so anchory and wrist-heavy as is, I would try to use some bursts that are more split rolly if possible
- 2:43.933 - same as 31.010
- 2:51.317 - same deal as 38.587
- 2:58.183 - little bit mean, would invert the one hand minitrill at 2:58.183 to 2:58.356

The chart has a couple of bursts that I feel are quite off here and there and could afford some nerfing or pattern changes, but a lot of the chart is quite sound and enjoyable overall. I particularly liked the midsection of the chart, though the most chaotic parts of the song (not necessarily the heaviest) I think could afford a bit more tact. I'm not entirely sure how players would perceive this chart, but it seemed like a mostly enjoyable experience when I tried playing through this. I like this more than any version of Dysnomia I've tried so far as well, so good job.