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EZ God Library :: FFR Batch Submission
Zeta -
EZ God Library -
The Flashbulb [7.75 / 10]
16th Official Tournament (see thread)
PublicEvents
Released
https://www.flashflashrevolution.com/vbz/showpost.php?p=4273001&postcount=2
- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Ez God Library (Zeta64)" vs "EZ God Library (Zeta)"
Simfile Folder Name
Ez God Library (Zeta64)Note Count
959Chart Length
2:05Average NPS
7.8585Estimated Difficulty
65.09
First Note
0:03Ending Note Delay
0:01Hand Bias
x -19
Framers
0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 1 3 - 9 4 - 23Jumps
x 145
Hands
x 40
Quads
x 0
Color Jumps
x 6
Color Hands
x 2
Color Quads
x 0
Most notes in:
1/3 of a Second9 - 27.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
10 - 20.00 nps 1 Second
17 - 17.00 nps 2 Seconds
27 - 13.50 nps 5 Seconds
61 - 12.20 nps 10 Seconds
111 - 11.10 nps 30 Seconds
292 - 9.73 nps 1 Minute
567 - 9.45 nps
Color Count
x 372 (38.79%)
x 109 (11.37%)
x 147 (15.33%)
x 181 (18.87%)
x 23 (2.4%)
x 22 (2.29%)
x 42 (4.38%)
x 33 (3.44%)
x 30 (3.13%)
Posted at 11:08pm on May 13th, 2023
EZ God Library
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- Permission, sync, metadata good.
- There are around 12 seconds of empty space at the end of the song--not huge, but likely worth cutting the mp3 if you're not going to use it.
- 7.719: This minijack is a bit tenuous. The sound at 7.840 is typically on a different column (e.g. 9.775).
- 12.920: Not super keen on this one either.
- 13.394: Change pattern to 132 for PR?
- 22.598: Column 1 to distinguish from both 22.840 and the preceding trill?
- 55.744: Feels odd ignoring the clear percussion here at the end of the phrase for the delayed piano when the opposite was done at 39.533 (the piano is a bit earlier there, but the note synced to percussion).
- 68.325: Lower than jump at 67.841.
- 76.228: Piano more accurately on the 32nd at 76.248. (This is straight 3/32nds.)
- 81.268, 102.559: Note for low piano?
- 100.260: The straight 24ths to piano stand out more to me than the polyrhythm with percussion here. Suggest replacing 100.381 with a note to piano at 100.341.
- 102.680-104.615: This is very cool.
- As a general note, I'd suggest moving your colour theory white notes into position with subbeats. At a tempo this low, the difference is 10ms, which is not enormous but definitely noticeable visually and kinaesthetically, particularly in cases like 18.596 where it forces a tighter jack.
- I also find myself being confused sometimes about grace note usage. They do make sense technically, but the emphasis sometimes feels off; for a prime example, see 25.743, where a big prominent buzz gets only a single 16th but is surrounded by two flams to softer sounds. Also 67.357, the flam followed there sounds very similar to the extended sound at 67.680 which gets no accenting.
- Overall though, cool file, and also cool to see something from Our Simulacra charted. Plays pretty smoothly and can go in as-is, but I do think this would benefit from some touch-ups. [7.5/10]
Posted at 11:09pm on May 13th, 2023
Ez God Library (Zeta64) [8/10]
> Permission check good.
> Sync looks good (No changes necessary).
> No issues found within simfile properties.
> No issues found within submission folder contents.
Although rhythmically synced, This intro appears to be the wrong BPM. Notice how the notes are staggered every three 16ths? We also have some clear swing at 0:09.412. This suggests a bpm more like 165.333 or 82.666. The bpm would then switch back to 124 at 0:14.613
- 0:39.412 considering all of the percussion charted this feels like a particularly odd note to leave out. The piano note also comes in a bit earlier than the placed note. more accurate timing would make the lack of note less obvious.
I feel like the choice of which short buzzes to chart could have been better. You have notes like 0:32.758 Which sound more accented to me, but dont get grace notes like the following buzz which is much softer. Or like 0:34.613 which isn't charted, but 0:37.355 is. You dont have to chart the sounds exactly either. You can represent the faster sounds with fewer notes, similar to how one might dump by charting more notes for fewer sounds. Also i'm not telling you to chart all of the buzzes. I think the current density of graces is good for the chart. There are just a few throughout the chart that could've been added (and maybe some that could be removed)