EXILE (UnityBoi) [5/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC MOSTLY OK (Off by a small 6-8 ms)

First of all, props for your first submission! We love having more stepartists submitting stuff.
The chart has some structural concerns that are a bit too important to accept the chart and would require a fair amount of work, but it has good potential and nothing is egregiously bad. Here are some specific points to note:

12.260-24.289: This part is a bit underwhelming. One idea would be to layer in the delays of the melody, for example at 12.642, 12.929, 13.215, etc, and also adding singles on the missing 4ths for the kicks, such as 13.406, 15.317, 16.464, etc. This would keep the section easy but more engaging.

24.489-36.718: Here, the main concern is mostly that the jacks and minijacks don't exactly match the melody. The motif that's charted is consistent which is nice, but the melody doesn't quite justify any jacks, or at the very least not to this extent.

36.718-41.304: In this section the jacks are dropped, however the jumps are unintuitive relative to the music and not consistent. For example, compare 37.578 and 38.343, why are they different?

42.833-47.419: Here, in contrast with the previous section, there is inconsistency regarding the jumps on the 4ths; they were consistent earlier, but here they're often dropped.

1:13.406-1:24.871: The music's intensity in this section is pretty comparable to the section that starts at 48.948, yet the layering and density is drastically different (the latter being much easier, especially considering the 32nds in the former).

Overall you did a good job at expressing variety in a song that's honestly a very difficult pick for a first submission. The song itself is really repetitive and forces a very careful approach to the layering, motifs and consistency to allow for a proper difficulty curve that matches the intensity while still being entertaining and coherent. For now, this will have to go back to the drawing board.

EXILE (UnityBoi) [6/10]
>Permission good (BOF 2010)
>Folder contents, metadata good
>Sync good

I have to admit a lot of this chart is very confusing to me. There’s a possibility I’m just not understanding it correctly, which is why I’m giving a rating within appeal range.

Specifically,
24.489 - 1:01.177 - I don’t understand the jack use - where and for how long jacks are used. It’s clearly not for PR, and I don’t know how these are structured.
36.718 - 1:01.177 - Layering is rather unclear. All I can really notice is it building to a maximist/chordjack approach, which could work if it didn’t stack with the jack length problem quite as much.

1:01.464, 1:02.228, etc. - (subjective, can ignore) I can get the minijack idea of this but the extra jumps here are a little wonky

1:14.075 - 1:22.196 - Jack placement also a concern here

The chart makes a lot more sense after the above point.
The rest of the chart would likely require a rather large overhaul with focus on jack placements in particular. I think I can see what you were aiming for but the chart doesn’t quite deliver in execution.
Pretty solid for a first submission!~