Burn :: FFR Batch Submission

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hi19hi19 - Burn - NceS [7.75 / 10]

16th Official Tournament (see thread)

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Rejected

https://manbow.nothing.sh/event/event.cgi?action=More_def&event=127&num=187

This file got hands.

Simfile Folder Name

Burn (hi19hi19)

Note Count

720

Chart Length

2:14

Average NPS

5.506

Estimated Difficulty

42.93

First Note

0:04

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -36

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 0 4 - 0

Jumps

								x 104
							

Hands

								x 111
							

Quads

x 1

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
8 - 24.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
10 - 20.00 nps 1 Second
13 - 13.00 nps 2 Seconds
22 - 11.00 nps 5 Seconds
47 - 9.40 nps 10 Seconds
88 - 8.80 nps 30 Seconds
251 - 8.37 nps 1 Minute
469 - 7.82 nps

Color Count

x 555 (77.08%)

x 135 (18.75%)

x 0 (0%)

x 30 (4.17%)

x 0 (0%)

Largest Note Gaps

2.03s1.83s1.63s1.23s1s1s0.83s0.83s

Updated with better patterns in the drop.

A new chart file was uploaded.

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Burn (hi19hi19) [8.5/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC MOSTLY OK (Seems generally late by roughly one 192nd/9ms)

1:18.292: This is obviously the spike of the chart. It's very justified given the song, but do consider stopping it at 1:20.725 to follow the synth transition instead. Anything to shorten that long stream is good.

1:57.110: No hardstyle kick here. Ghost note.

Very solid chart all around. The PR and consistency are great and there's a good variety of stuff to learn for a newer player. The 16ths stream is definitely not ideal, but also not inherently wrong either. Intro lyrics can sometimes be off from the respective 8th note by a decent amount, but at this difficulty it's best to keep it as is. (see 16.671-17.482 for a more noticeable example).

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Burn (hi19hi19) [7/10] [Fixes Required]

- Perms, metadata, sync are good

**1:10.184-1:14.644 - Getting to this part feels dull, a suggestion would be to mirror the 2nd half of it to the right to make this section slightly more "interesting"
1:16.265 - Not quite sure why this jump lands on the same column as the 8th on 2. Wouldn't it be better if this entire set of jumps be straight jumptrills? ([34][12][34])
**1:57.110 - Ghost jump

The hands segment could use a little bit of additional representation to the synth. It feels pretty empty and uninteresting when it's only to the kicks. From a practice standpoint at this difficulty, I *guess* this works. FR on ** notes, since they're extremely noticable within the file.

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Checking in on the status of this submission, as it's past the 1 month probationary period with a "Fixes Required" flag, but there's been no acknowledgment of judge notes or fixes submitted.

Files/Songs with the "Fixes Required" tag require at a minimum a fix submitted based on the above notes from judges, or a response appealing the notes involved in the reason for it being labeled as Fixes Required.

I will check back on this at a later date. If it does not receive a response or fix by then, it could risk rejection.

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Oh my bad, I forgor

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Moving to rejected. If you'd like this reversed, get in-touch with me within a reasonable amount of time (1-2 weeks) of this post and maybe something can be worked out.

Otherwise, please consider resubmitting to another open batch.

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