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jacobvl39 - Rave Girls - The Quick Brown Fox [7.25 / 10]

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This is mostly a test of jack (longjack + light chordjack) and trill stamina, with a brief section of awkward flams that can be manipped if you know what you're doing.

✔️ This chart has been marked as final and shouldn't receive any more changes.

Simfile Folder Name

Rave Girls (jacobvl39)

Note Count

1940

Chart Length

2:14

Average NPS

14.8016

Estimated Difficulty

95.95

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -28

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 279 4 - 220

Jumps

								x 390
							

Hands

								x 108
							

Quads

x 0

Color Jumps

								x 27
							

Color Hands

x 2

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
22 - 22.00 nps 2 Seconds
41 - 20.50 nps 5 Seconds
95 - 19.00 nps 10 Seconds
182 - 18.20 nps 30 Seconds
517 - 17.23 nps 1 Minute
946 - 15.77 nps

Color Count

x 504 (25.98%)

x 447 (23.04%)

x 6 (0.31%)

x 673 (34.69%)

x 16 (0.82%)

x 174 (8.97%)

x 28 (1.44%)

x 56 (2.89%)

x 36 (1.86%)

Largest Note Gaps

0.23s0.23s0.23s0.23s0.23s0.23s0.23s0.23s

The middle section with the flams was really gross, so I made it slightly less gross

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1922 => 1926
AVG NPS changed: 14.66429 => 14.69481
Hand Bias changed: -32 => -48

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Rave Girls (jacobvl39) [7/10]

PERMS OK
SYNC OK

13.677: The kicks don't end here, why the hand? Should probably be another (23)(14)(234) from this timestamp.

18.094: Jump?

24.426: No crash on this one so probably just (13) instead.

25.908: Shouldn't this and the following 16th jump be reversed? (34)(12)

28.060: Same logic as 24.426. No crash here. See also 35.308 and maybe other iterations like this.

43.802: Missing note.

55.128: This burst should lead into the 32nds at 55.298 (not necessarily extending the trill). If too spiky, consider removing 55.213.

58.525: Just changing the patterning of the quad flams here is kind of underwhelming. Changing the quantization of the flam to something slightly faster for each would convey the glitchy sound a bit more.

1:02.376: Same as 55.128. Check this iteration too.

1:05.321 & 1:05.660: Missing notes.

1:09.851-1:10.304: Why is this iteration suddenly different from the previous two? Same applies to 1:17.099.

1:20.270 & 1:20.723: Hands?

Second half is pretty much copy paste from the first one so the same concerns apply.

Pretty neat layering scheme; it has some strange decisions but they ultimately feel consistent for the most part and make the chart quite balanced and entertaining.

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Rave Girls (jacobvl39) [7.5/10]
>Permission good (Blanket)
>Folder contents, metadata good
>Sync good

44.822 / 46.634 / 1:35.559 / 1:37.371 - this note feels like it needs more emphasis - either a 32nd triplet or just a jump

Fairly straightforward, only have some minor subjective suggestions. Could be fun as a token off of Vi Sitter I Ventrilo Och Spelar DotA. Good to go.

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Thanks for the feedback. I implemented most of the suggestions as well as doing a little bit of layering rework in the chordjack section (08.241 - 28.831 plus the repeat later in the song)

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Note Count changed: 1926 => 1940
AVG NPS changed: 14.69481 => 14.80163
Hand Bias changed: -48 => -28

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Really nice, good stuff

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I noticed this is still set to Changes Recommended. Were you intending to move it to accepted after my fixes? Not sure if that actually matters, just thought I might point it out

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